Saturday, January 16, 2010

"Unknown sadness"

Moonlight dancing on the waves,
Converted everything into silver,
Heart is missin' someone,
But don't know who it is?

A tear dropped on my knees,
The moon giggled with please;
The cold waves whisperred ;
dry leaves gastured;

brought a slight smile,
with moist eyes,
and palpitating heart;
feeling something but
don't know what it is?

Life is blessed with,
the simple pleasures,
happy for a while,
but the very next moment;
Heart is sad again..


♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

nice poem..i like the rhymes you've tried to insert..sigh..i feel the same..though i know whose the one that makes me happy and at the same time makes me sad

keep blogging~!

smile :3

Madhu said...

aww....two deepest emotions conveyed..:) :(

Glenn Kun said...

hello.. It is a must seen movie. ^^. hehe. Probably this film is now showing in your country, right?

keep in touch. ^^.
I'm not really into poem >< . but I like what u are doin.

tristarfivestar said...

i like your poem.. thats why i hate you :P

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Ayu
thanks dear! :)

@ Madhu
thanks! ^_^

@ Glenn
hey glenn! good to see u again! about the movie yeah! :)

@ Tristarfivestar
you hate me??? O.O
its okay coz atleast you like my poems :P

Sorcerer said...

nice ones chocladey!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ sorcy
thank you! :)

Sankoobaba said...

"feeling something but
don't know what it is?"

for me its loneliness due to missing a loved one!!

good poem!! excellent stuff!!

keep it up

PS the Pratsie said...

very heartfelt .. could almost imagine these happenning to me ! nice :)

PS the Pratsie said...

very heartfelt .. could almost imagine these happenning to me ! nice :)


Hi CL,

O, what a sad poem... I've been in the same situation before where i felt I wanna shout and cry out loud but don't know why... Loved the flow!!!:)

Good day!!!:)


Rishi said...

ur talkin like a pregnant woman... one moment happy the other sad...


jokes apart... t'was nice..

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

In times of distress the mind churns good memories to make you feel good. The faint smile that appeared on your face was the mind trying to show you that your life has sweet memories as well and that you need to cheer up. But then the practical mind is always shoving you forward into the present showing you how grim the situation is and that is the cause for the heart to cry again.

A very nice poem. The solitude is explained nicely.

P.S.: In the third stanza, third line, did you mean "palpitating"?

Chocolate Lover said...

@ sankoo baba
thank you! :)

@ PS the pratsie
thank you!

@ Kelvin
thanks! :)

huh?? nooooo!!! aaah..! :|

@ Vittaldas
yup! thanks! :))

DayDreamer said...

Hey Shriti..

Nice work..

On the other hand am just wondering these are just your creations...and not current emotions..

Coz if it is your state of mind..thn I would be worried..