Tuesday, January 26, 2010

"Darkness.."


It hurts when you,
stay with someone else,
How can one smile when
life's ending in despair;
Want to smile but
enchanting and nostalgic,
memories gives tears.
How to tell you, my fears
Eyes glitters, hand shivers,
So afraid to tell the world,
about the darkness.
Lifelessness cries in loneliness,
Still you want me to fly,
'am not afraid of falling but
afraid of losing you forever;
Would you hold my hand,
to show the way to life,
won't you be promising me,
for being together;
heart sinkin' to the bottom,
and no one knows the emptiness;
bleeding eyes with numbness,
taking me to a world,
Where I can't feel you anymore;
Now the demon has arrived,
to take my lfe..

22 comments:

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

nice depiction of emotions..i was stunned~! x)

Sorcerer said...

nice..nice!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Ayu
thanks! ^_^

@ Sorcy
thank you! ^_^

ambiguous_angel said...

:(
that's sad.

cheer up:)

but BTW, its nicely written:)
-as usual..

Chocolate Lover said...

@ angel
thanks! :)

Randeep said...

Sad. But the way u expressed.. superb. Keep it up.

Cheers
Randeep

Shas said...

Touched my heart.
Keep it up!!

Nipun said...

good work once again..
BTW how old are u??

Cheers

Nuts

Sankoobaba said...

"How to tell you, my fears"
and
"'am not afraid of falling but
afraid of loosing you forever;"

kind of descriptive of a few things in my life...

beautiful!!

keep it up!!

NoFaIrYtAlE said...

beautiful poem as usual :)

Quest said...

Into poetry mode? :)

Sapna Sapien said...

I absolutely love your blog....its beautifully madeeeeeeeeee

Pria said...

uuummmm.. nice again!!:)

sulagna said...

sad ho gaye padh k :(

myunrevealedthoughts said...

"Afraid of losing you forever" - that struck me!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Randeep
thank you! :)

@ Shas
thanks! ^_^

@ Nipun
haha! sweet sixteen!! :P
shocked??

@ Sankoo baba
thank you ^_^

@ Pooja
thanks! ^_^

@ Quest
haha! yup! :D

@ Sapna
hi! welcome to my blog.
'am glad that you liked my blog!

@ Pria
thanks! ^_^

@ Sulagna di
sorry di! :(
didn't want to make anyone sad

@ minnie runner
thank you! ^_^

Nipun said...

yeah!
obviously shocked..
U dont sound like one..
When I was of ur age I cudnt even think this much...:)

vidya said...

sad one nicely written again..
Change 'loosing' to 'losing'..a small spelling mistake.

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Nipun
hahahaha! ;)

@ Vidya
thank you! ^_^

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Some strong words you have here! Phew! Too dark, but nice too. :-)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Vittaldas
thank you! :)

WINDOWLAD said...

Hi CL,

Captivating. Moving. Enchanting. Ameliorating. Well done!!!:)

Keep safe!!!:D

>Kelvin