Wednesday, January 6, 2010

Heart vs Mind

Heart says,
Hold my hands in dark,
Be a guide, show the Path,
To shield the poor life,
Walk along..
Be my smile and be my tears,
I know you feel the same,
The agony of soul is,
Still in it...
Life's begging death,
Don't know why?
Mind says:
You know me but still,
you are a stranger.
The reason for it,
Is still unknown..
Look into the eyes,
They may reveal,
Secrets in my heart,
That no one knows..
Seems like you care,
But I guess,
Cursed one stays alone..
May be that's what,
Is written in fate..
I don't want,
Any harm to you..
I have to stay,
Alone in despair..
The cursed one would
Never make you smile..

13 comments:

DayDreamer said...

Another great creation from the master architect..

U can weave magic..with your words..

I just read them..n keep wondering can I ever be as good as this..

Keep it up!!

WINDOWLAD said...

Filled with so much melancholy... i understand what you're goin' through right now... I've been in the same situation before... yes, it's tough to weigh what your heart says and what your mind thinks... try to balance both, that's the best advice I can give to you... i know it's hard to do but i know you can make it too... you're a diligent girl and sweet lady... Just don't forget to pray... Love and light to you... Smile!!!:)

>Kelvin

An Ordinary Gal said...

hmmmmm nice it was....u r saying tht u don't know but it's not true...you know it well that why you wrote it..hmmmm btw really good :)

angel said...

hey nice one dear.. cursed one needs to stay alone..but take it positively dear.. life s not a curse but a beautiful gift.. nobody deserves loneliness..

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

A constant struggle between the heart and the mind. The heart has its own say while the mind overrules everything that the heart has to say. The heart on the other hand never overrules the mind, because it is kind. Indeed Heart vs. Mind is a never ending tussle and we human beings are always torn apart having to choose either the heart or the mind.

Sorcerer said...

:)
first one to comment I guess..
hey!! lovely poem..as always
and thanks for the award :)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Dev
Thank you! :)
*blush blush*

@ Kelvin
Thanks Kelvin! :))

@ Riya
Thanks :))

@ Angel
Thanks :)

@ Vittaldas
thanks! :)

@ Sorcy
LOL hmm.. Thanks! ;)

Sunakshi said...

Sad one,yet beautiful :)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Sunakshi di
thanks :D

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

I love the theme of your poem today..I like the vs factors..hehe..i also made something like this before though obviously not as good as you..actually i wrote that when i was in highschool in our native language.. but its about the mind and the heart arguing about deciding how to love and sorts like that..

anyway..your poem is better and the emotions on it really is astounding..i adore you for creating such sad but beautiful poems

lovelots, ayu :P

Nipun said...

Kudos!!
No words to explain..
Cheers.

Nuts

funkyrave said...

Ahhh!! where do u get such thoughts from?? seriously profound! and awesome!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Ayu
thanks dear for appreciating me but seriously you are the best in this art :D
love you too ;)

@ Nipun
thank you :))

@ Funkyrave
LOL God knows!!!
thanks! :)