Saturday, January 9, 2010

I was left alone..

Touched the moonlight,
and listened to the shooting stars,
heart sang a new song,
it felt so cosy and warm,
tears giggled in eyes,
shadow smiled there,
fireflies danced in dark,
didn't know where to go,
anger died, sadness cried,
sleep walked and talked,
clouds chased the moon,
found a friend unknown ,
that stayed with me,
shared the same ,
Don't know when,
tired eyes slept,
when gained consciousness,
you were gone,
and I...
I was left alone..

15 comments:

Sunakshi said...

I loved it! xD

Sorcerer said...

pa..ra..pa..pa...pa..ra..ra..
I am loving it :)

WarmSunshine said...

nice one.... keep writing girl :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

aww..so sad at the last lines..but i love the figuratives you used~! getting better and better~!! great!! two thumbs up!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Sunakshi di
thanks di! :D

@ Sorcy
thank you! :))

@ Warm sunshine
thanks! :)

@ Ayu
thank you! :)

edxaii said...

thanks for dropping by.. keep on updating yer blog^^ and keep on writing! i love it~ nice meeting you.. :) visit back whenever you want!



loves, edxaii^^

Chocolate Lover said...

@ edxaii
thanks! :)

tristarfivestar said...

i just want to see how ur our brain works!!!!
LOVED IT

Chocolate Lover said...

Hmmm???
huh???
aaaaahh.. my brain is not working !! :(

funkyrave said...

yet another comes from the choco gal!
simply awesome :)
keep smiling and posting
:-)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Funkirave
thank you! :))

WINDOWLAD said...

A mixture of sadness and gladness... fairly reunited.... well done!!!:)

>Good day!!!:)

~Kelvin

Chocolate Lover said...

@ kelvin
thanks! :)

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

I like the imagery. No doubt that it is a very good attempt. But don't mind, you could have said it in lesser words. I know you can do it. :-) Truly, I like the effort. Nice theme.

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Vittaldas
thanks! :)