Saturday, January 9, 2010

I was left alone..

Touched the moonlight,
and listened to the shooting stars,
heart sang a new song,
it felt so cosy and warm,
tears giggled in eyes,
shadow smiled there,
fireflies danced in dark,
didn't know where to go,
anger died, sadness cried,
sleep walked and talked,
clouds chased the moon,
found a friend unknown ,
that stayed with me,
shared the same ,
Don't know when,
tired eyes slept,
when gained consciousness,
you were gone,
and I...
I was left alone..

14 comments:

S. said...

I loved it! xD

Sorcerer said...

pa..ra..pa..pa...pa..ra..ra..
I am loving it :)

WarmSunshine said...

nice one.... keep writing girl :)

Shriti said...

@ Sunakshi di
thanks di! :D

@ Sorcy
thank you! :))

@ Warm sunshine
thanks! :)

@ Ayu
thank you! :)

edxaii said...

thanks for dropping by.. keep on updating yer blog^^ and keep on writing! i love it~ nice meeting you.. :) visit back whenever you want!



loves, edxaii^^

Shriti said...

@ edxaii
thanks! :)

UGLYRAED said...

i just want to see how ur our brain works!!!!
LOVED IT

Shriti said...

Hmmm???
huh???
aaaaahh.. my brain is not working !! :(

funkyrave said...

yet another comes from the choco gal!
simply awesome :)
keep smiling and posting
:-)

Shriti said...

@ Funkirave
thank you! :))

kelvin s.m. said...

A mixture of sadness and gladness... fairly reunited.... well done!!!:)

>Good day!!!:)

~Kelvin

Shriti said...

@ kelvin
thanks! :)

itsyvitsy said...

I like the imagery. No doubt that it is a very good attempt. But don't mind, you could have said it in lesser words. I know you can do it. :-) Truly, I like the effort. Nice theme.

Shriti said...

@ Vittaldas
thanks! :)