Touched the moonlight,
and listened to the shooting stars,
heart sang a new song,
it felt so cosy and warm,
tears giggled in eyes,
shadow smiled there,
fireflies danced in dark,
didn't know where to go,
sleep walked and talked,
clouds chased the moon,
found a friend unknown ,
that stayed with me,
shared the same ,
Don't know when,
tired eyes slept,
when gained consciousness,
you were gone,
and I...
I was left alone..
14 comments:
I loved it! xD
pa..ra..pa..pa...pa..ra..ra..
I am loving it :)
nice one.... keep writing girl :)
@ Sunakshi di
thanks di! :D
@ Sorcy
thank you! :))
@ Warm sunshine
thanks! :)
@ Ayu
thank you! :)
thanks for dropping by.. keep on updating yer blog^^ and keep on writing! i love it~ nice meeting you.. :) visit back whenever you want!
loves, edxaii^^
@ edxaii
thanks! :)
i just want to see how ur our brain works!!!!
LOVED IT
Hmmm???
huh???
aaaaahh.. my brain is not working !! :(
yet another comes from the choco gal!
simply awesome :)
keep smiling and posting
:-)
@ Funkirave
thank you! :))
A mixture of sadness and gladness... fairly reunited.... well done!!!:)
>Good day!!!:)
~Kelvin
@ kelvin
thanks! :)
I like the imagery. No doubt that it is a very good attempt. But don't mind, you could have said it in lesser words. I know you can do it. :-) Truly, I like the effort. Nice theme.
@ Vittaldas
thanks! :)
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