Wednesday, January 27, 2010

"so broken.."

Everyone is happy but why not me?
And if I am happy why don't I feel so?
I am so broken but still so strong.
I am missin' you but why?
You make me cry
and at the same
you are my smile
dreams lies in you
Just want you to be happy
Even if I have to spend days in tears
I swear, I would but what about my fears
I am so alone and so broken...


Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

thats so melancholic :-) why into sad poems these days girl? pen some bright thought as well at times :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

i feel the same..though i dont cry..coz that will just be like self-pity >_

and i dont want that to happen again..

i can relate to the poem..nicely done

☆Ths[Schrei]☆ said...

n-i-c-e! :)

karan a said...

Hope this comment makes you smile!

After every darkness, you find brightness. After every failure comes success. After every saturday comes sunday. After every trying, you discover something new. After every post, you find accolades and appreciations!

Life is beautiful. Enjoy and live strong.


Nipun said...

Is that an example of sacrifice??
NIce work once again..



NoFaIrYtAlE said...

aww...sad 1 again...good poem though :)

Pria said...

wowwww.. so vry nice lines dear..

Sankoobaba said...

lovely poem...
in your own sweet style..
you use simple words to evoke complex emotons

Sankoobaba said...

lovely poem...
in your own sweet style..
you use simple words to evoke complex emotions

Madhu said...

Thats so awww again...:(

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Shravan
hmm.. I actually tried for a brighter one but I failed!! :(
Its easy for me to pen a darker one! :D

@ Ayu
oh! I am happy that you can relate it! :)

@ Tharangni
thank you!

@ Karan
awww.. thank you! and welcome to my blog.
hope to see you around :)

@ Nipun
may be? :|

@ Pooja

@ Pria
thank you :)

@ Sankoo baba
thank you! :)

@ Madhu
yup! :|

ambiguous_angel said...

that is so sad:(

i believe you're in your emo mode..
sometimes, i exactly feel the same..

missing someone who shouldn't be miss:(

sulagna said...

ki hua??? al oki na Shree???

Chocolate Lover said...

* sigh
good to know that 'am not alone

@ Sulagna di
hmmm.. don't know what's happening with me and why is it happening.

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

I felt that the poem ended abruptly, or was it intentional? Perhaps, it was intentional. When emotions are bottled words run out of your mind and perhaps you wanted to exploit this feelings. If so, nicely done.

Shas said...

Numbing pain numbs our sensitivity to things. Well-expressed

Gauri Mathur said...

Hugs little girl.. :):)

Prats said...

hey swt hrt... y so sad ?? promise a smiley post soon..plzzz :)

Amnn.......//1! said...

hey we need to tlk .,
u have gone all negative ..
i have been observing from the start...
u r not happy .. ~!!!1
we need to tlk
i cant see gals unhappy ...!!!

An Ordinary Gal said...

ohh sad...i was feeling the same before some days :(

well written dear :)

Tripat "Prerna" said...

thats the true love...
so invigorating

Sorcerer said...

good one...:)

Divya said...

so true ur poem... bt jus cheer up! :)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Vittaldas

@ Shas
thank you! :)

@ Gauri
thank you ^_^

@ Prats
okay! :)

@ Aman
arey kuch nahi hua sach me! :|
don't worry 'am fine :)

@ Riya
thankiyu! :)

@ Tripat

love? :|

@ Sorcy
thankiyu! ^^

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Divya
thanks! :)

Rishi said...

good one.. but could u write something a bit more positive..

u r already great in such dark gloomy kind of poems..

may be something wacky?

சக்தியின் மனம் said...


Chocolate Lover said...

@ Rishi
thank you!
I'll try :)

@ #$%^&*(@
thanks for dropping by! :)


Hi CL,

Dark yet worth praising... Liked the flow!!!:)


Chocolate Lover said...

@ Kelvin
thanks buddy :))