Sunday, January 10, 2010

"You"


I want you to be happy.
Even if I die, do not cry,
Even if I hate you,
and You hate me,
Do smile.
I don't want to hurt you,
I don't want to hate you,
but the thing is ,
you create few situations,
which are always unplesant.
I just hate the thing when,
you use me, you betray me.
I just want to be happy but,
you make me sad,
you make me feel alone.
Do you know?
it's true.
it's all because of you.
But still no offences,
cause once we were together,
we've shared the best,
and I know one day,
you'll regret for it.
you'll come back and cry,
may on the day when,
I'll be taking my last breath.

17 comments:

Sunakshi said...

Oops!thats really sad one,yet hopeful!

you're in love eh?you can tell by commenting on my key keeper lol xP

^ just kidding xD

funkyrave said...

Ahh! thats so sad and sweet..
No one is going to hurt or betray u once he reads this :-)
and still in search of qualifying adjective
Keep Posting
Cheerio :-)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Sunakshi di
love????
na na na na na na na na na! ;)

@ Ravi
thank you! :)
and about searching a new adjective hmmm.. carry on! ;P :D

Selenium said...

Sounds like you're having your Emotional swings nowadays eh?? O.O

Or do you write stuff like that purely out of your own imagination??

myunrevealedthoughts said...

Oh.. is this suppose to be a tragic ending?

WINDOWLAD said...

Hi CL,

Hey, this one is pretty sad... and who's that mystery "YOU"? [i'm quiet curious...!!!:P]

>Kelvin

An Ordinary Gal said...

hmmmm sad but nice :)

☆Ths[Schrei]☆ said...

hey..........!^_^
reallly nice!^_^

Aditi said...

thts touching...so much of innocence in tht poem..

If ur goin thru it then i pray tht all ur worries come ot an end.. and may u always be smiling :)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Selenium
yeah many of my posts are just imagination but some are the current happenings of my life ;)

@ my unrevealed thoughts
yeah may be! :)

@ Kelvin
haha LOL (you is a girl who was once my best friend) :P

@ Riya
thanks :)

@ Tharangni
thank you! :)

@ Aditi
thank you! :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

gosh!! i can relate to this~!!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Ayu
:))

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Patience and tolerance is a virtue. And this has come out very nicely in this poem. Keep writing.

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Vittaldas
thank you! ^_^

Sankoobaba said...

wow....always your poems begin well and in the end they send a jolt of pain..

in a good way i mean.. the emotional jolt

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

This is very beautifully written...

though sad one it is.. :(

Chocolate Lover said...

@ sankoobaba
thanks! :)

@ mahesh bhaiya
thank yoo! =)