Saturday, January 30, 2010

when you are with me..

Feeling so lost.
Realised that
life ain't so dark,
peeping in my joys,
I am not scared of fallin'.
Heart giggles,
'am not alone anymore.
cocoon me in love,
Everything has changed,
'cause now you are with me.
making me cry,
the tears of joy.
Illuminating my soul,
with the sparks of light,
now no more darkness inside.
cherishing the feeling,
'cause I never felt that before.

PS. tried to write a brighter one this time. :)
PPS. err... am not good at this :(
PPPS. couldnot think of a tittle! any suggestions!?!

20 comments:

☆Ths[Schrei]☆ said...

hey.. hate to mention this... but there is not blog title.. :D

Nipun said...

LOVE ACTUALLY would be apt for this...:)
Even i wrote a poem like this sometime back..
Is this true or just a writers imagination?
Good work choco..

Cheers

Nuts

An Ordinary Gal said...

hey it was not nice but still it has touch of sadness...thats wt i felt :)

ambiguous_angel said...

good one.

im not really good at title so i will just let the other reader think for you:)

sulagna ™ said...

hurt but not scared

Sorcerer said...

Its got a lil sunshine of love.
kinda like the intial stages of a bounce back from getting hurt.
well said

myunrevealedthoughts said...

Tears of Joy? Well, that's the most wonderful tear you could ever shed :)

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Pria said...

when u r with me?? i m nt gud at these.. but just giving a try.. :)

vidya said...

A positive touch..thats a nice change:)
for the title..hmm..how about - 'Love mends'? or 'love heals' :d

Sankoobaba said...

"With Me"

Sankoobaba said...

or "With You"

Sankoobaba said...

good..one.. keep it up...variety is always good..you will get better with time.

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

well is isn't exactly a brighter one post but your effort is worth praising at all..i understand you,i also find it difficult to characterize happy emotions compare to sadder one >_

Divya said...

hey.. m really glad that u came up with a beautiful poem with full of hopes :) :)

Pria said...

aaww.. thts an apt title.. :)

WINDOWLAD said...

Hi CL,

At last... after 10 years... finally i'm back... how are ye buddy?:)

Ammp, i think there's no such bad or good works it just that your last was better than this one...!!! Do i make sense!!!:/

Anyhow, i enjoyed the read !!!:)

Good day!!!:)

>Kelvin

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

When you are with a loved one, sometimes you get lost in your own world thinking what bright things you could do together. The heart feels unbounded joy in those images and there is soothing feeling when you return to the present in the arms, or in the warm embrace of your loved one. :-) This is what I felt.

HaRy!! said...

:( :( ...made me feel bad!

HaRy

Selenium said...

1> The title is fine
2> You're still good (at all this)
3> Yes... I get the impression that you're in love. And if you aren't, then that's an admirable capability. Keep using it :D

BTW... I find it difficult making sad songs. Happier songs are so much easier to make :) (Yes, I'm trying to make you Jealous... :P )

Arslan said...

i liked it its nice...