Wednesday, January 20, 2010

For you...

The bond between,
me and you shines,
more than gold..
I have to steal,
all your tears;
I will fight from,
all your fears;
I am aware of,
your heart which,
cries every moment;
I am aware of ,
your eagerness;
to find happiness;
Trust me,
life isn't so miserable;
I am here for you,
I won't let you, 
to cry anymore,
Share sorrows with me,
I promise, I would,
never let it,
to come again,
I would bring joy,
back in your life..

26 comments:

Nipun said...

speechless..
some real serious work..:)

Cheers

Nuts

tristarfivestar said...

kewl i like your poetry more cuz i found out that they are really personal and from your heart!

Rohit Dassani said...

See thats what I am talking abt.... u cant stop writing,...... :) like it!!

DayDreamer said...

Good work Shriti!!

Sankoobaba said...

very good poem..
aptly describes the title..

the beauty of this poem is that its not necessarily for lovers..it can be for friends..or ...

versatile.

Selenium said...

Maybe I read a bit of Suzumiya Haruhi too much... but this one hit my head out cold. (Sweet Dreams anyone O_o ?? )

Selenium said...

Well, I suddenly remembered that I had made a song with the same title O_o ...

Lyrics were naturally different (and not authored by me :P I just made the music)

Ya... I posted it on my blog too. Give it a try if you may ->

http://seleniums-world.blogspot.com/2008/03/creation-by-chance.html

I don't consider my Lyrics to be at par though... -__-;

But thanks for reminding me :)
I completely forgot my own creation

Rishi said...

nice one

vidya said...

nice one..

myunrevealedthoughts said...

t'was a heartwarming promise :)

Moonlight said...

Lovely!
I enjoyed reading it.
Keep up the great work! =D

An Ordinary Gal said...

superb dear...really very very nice :)

WINDOWLAD said...

Hi CL,

That's really sweet... and so many promises to raise... nice one!!!:)

Keep safe!!:D

>Kelvin

Glenn Kun said...

go for the poetry ms. choclet ^^

Sorcerer said...

I agree with Nipun
the lines are awesome.

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Beautifully written dear one, beautifully written.

The feelings are so true and unpretentious. They are so unadulterated and genuine. Beautiful. The emotions are there for everyone to fathom.

I wish there was a "Like" link like in Facebook so I could give it a thumbs up. :-)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

waaaahh!! waht a sweet one..i wish mystery guy would tell me that~!! TAT!! maybe ill die in happiness!!


by the way, my new post:
movie review of 5 centimeters per second

check it out~! ^_^

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Nipun
thank you! ^^

@ Tristarfivestar
Thanks buddy! :)

@ Rohit
thank you! :)

@ Dev
Thanks! ^^

@ Sankoobaba
thank you :)

@ Selenium
thanks buddy!
sweet dreams!!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Rishi
thank you! :)

@ Vidya
thanks! :)

@ minnie runner
Thanks! ^_^

@ Moonlight
thank you! :)

@ Riya
thanks! :)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Kelvin
hi buddy!
Thank you! :)

@ Glenn
thanks glenn! :)

@ Sorcy
thank you ^^

@ Vittaldas
thank you! ^_^

@ Ayu
thanks dear! :)

Shas said...
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Cursed♪♫ said...

You know, I can totally feel what you post. There are like a print out of my life!
You write really very well. Loved your poem!!!
Take care :)

..pAnKHuRi.. said...

Very nice :)
*applaud*

Shas said...

Very sweet. Touched my heart.
Keep it up!!

sulagna said...

ohhh beautiful

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Juhi
thank you :)

@ Pankhuri
thanks! :)

@ Shas
thank you :)

@ Sulagna di
thank you di! :)