Friday, January 22, 2010

Together..

Fears and tears,
are all gone,
Now realised,
what we are actually,
meant for,
We stand together
hands in hands,
forever..
We are all in this,
Together..
Let the stars, shoot,
Let the clouds, rain,
The brave heart,
is not afraid once again.
We are all in this,
together..
Making our dreams
come true..
This is our time,
no one else can have it.
When we reach high,
we all know,
we can fly..
We are all in this,
together..
We make,
each other strong;
No one else can,

break our bond..
Cause now,

we are all,
together..

14 comments:

Rohit Dassani said...

Hey what happen to you today? r u ok? Nice lines...... :)

Sankoobaba said...

together we can .. and we will...

good one...

NoFaIrYtAlE said...

hey ur blog is beautiful!!! Love ur layout!!! U write awesome poems! Keep writing..i'm gonna stalk u :)

*by stalkin i mena following :)

**one gal literally reported abuse on me cuz i used d word 'stalk' :D
she thot i was really gonna stalk her! LOL

edxaii said...

all together^^

Madhu said...

aww....cute..But the pics there...some cartoon ones na..!!

An Ordinary Gal said...

Yup!! it is the time to fly high...loved the lines :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

reminds me of the high school musicale's were all in this together..

very nice one choco :3

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Rohit
hmm.. nothin' :)

@ Sankoo baba
thanks! :)

@ Nofairytale
LOL
thanks! :)

@ Edxaii
thank you :)

@ Madhu
thanks! :)

@ Riya
thank you! :)

@ Ayu
haha! thanks gal! :)

Rishi said...

sweet

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

The first five lines are a little gud-bud. Thoda theek karna padega.

The rest is nice, free-flowing and soothing. We are together indeed. You must've been feeling really good when you write this one. :-)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Rishi
thanks! :)

@ Vittaldas
thank you! :)

WINDOWLAD said...

Hi CL,

Very nice and sweet...!!!:)

Good day!!!:)

>Kelvin

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Kelvin
thanks! :)

Arslan said...

awesome poem...really touching and the pics used just amplify to the effect more! .... I think ill bookmark this site... NICE!