Sunday, January 24, 2010

Shattered..


My soul betrayed me,
My tears cursed me,
My eyes so tired,
Smile hates me;
Heart cries,
for death.
My only,
Friend is lonliness.
Life's turning so miserable;
Love sinkin' in,
darkness.
Sorrow giggles,
on my helplessness.
May be that's in my fate;
May that's what I deserve.
Have to bear this till the end.

PS. check out the previous 100th post :) Trust me it's for you :)

24 comments:

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

awww..T_T taht's so dark and sad poem ...very nice depiction of feelings~!

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

awww..T_T taht's so dark and sad poem ...very nice depiction of feelings~!

Amnn.......//1! said...

heyy comeon u deserve much more ,,,,

HaRy!! said...

dark emtions at yur best!

Sorcerer said...

you have a way to put into words the deeper emotions..
good one!

ambiguous_angel said...

so sad:(

but very well written!

An Ordinary Gal said...

ohh dear...it was really nice

Chocolate Lover said...

@ AYU
thanks! :)

@ AMAN
thank you :)

@ Hary
Thank you :)

@ Sorcy
thanks! :)

@ Angel
thank you! :)

@ Riya
thank you! :)

Randeep said...

Wot happened dear. You alright na. I'm first time here.

Cheers
Randeep

Rishi said...

u deserve better...

and forget abt death.... its gonna take a long time before it reaches u

funkyrave said...

wow!! you really put ur mood swings so well in a poem..
awesome !
dont worry nothing needs to be beared till end, it will all pass
good or bad!
:-)

Divya said...

hey.. this post of urs reflecting that u r sad... hope all well with u :)

WINDOWLAD said...

Hi CL,

This one is so dark... but amazed at the emotions portrayed... well done!!!:)

P.S. I forgot to say on my previous comment: thank you for your sweetness and kind gestures... you're really a nice and cool buddy!!!:D

Good day!!!:)

>Kelvin

myunrevealedthoughts said...

Lonely? Depressed? Broken Hearted? Back when I was in highschool, I normally burst out my feelings through poems =)

Sankoobaba said...

"My only,
Friend is lonliness."
"Sorrow giggles,
on my helplessness."

very good poem...esp. the above lines..keep it up!!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Randeep
May be :|
welcome to my blog :D

@ Rishi
awww... thank you :)

@ Funkyrave
thank you! ^_^

@ Divya
thanks! :)

@ Kelvin
thank you and welcome! :)

@ Minnie runner
hi! thanks for stoping by leaving a comment ^_^

@ Sankoo baba
thank you :)

☆Ths[Schrei]☆ said...

sad and nostalgic.. but nice!^_^

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Poem is too sad Shree..and you completed 100 posts?? I am Jealous :(

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Tharangni
thanks dear! :)

@ Mahesh bhaiya
haha! nice :P

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

thank you..ill keep that in mind x3

btw..i love your new profile pic :) so cute..

NoFaIrYtAlE said...

beautiful as usual :)

vidya said...

oh..that's a dark one..hmm
nice usage of words, dear

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Ayu
thanks!

@ pooja
thank u!

@ Vidya
thanks! :)

CutePriya said...

Hey Dear,

Just read ur poem...so touchy...and so true...

Thanks. This one will stay close to my heart. keep writing and keep expressing...

Stay Happy & Smile...

Cheers,
Priya :)