Monday, January 18, 2010

"when you came.."

Hearts sings a song,
eyes need your smile,
don't know why do I feel so?
 hopes giggle again,
sadness shatters somewhere;
to find a new me,
why do I walk towards you?
feels so secure..
when you are near..
hold my hand,
and be like that forever..
you were the missin' piece
When you came; life,
was complete..

19 comments:

DayDreamer said...

Hey Shriti...

Dis is beautiful!!

:-)

WINDOWLAD said...

O, very sweet... [like chocolates and you!!!:P]

Good day!!!:)

>Kelvin

Nipun said...

hmmmm..
A romantic piece.
are u in love choco?
Gud work anyways..

Cheers

Nuts

myunrevealedthoughts said...

So, you already found you missing piece?

Sundeep said...

I really like your blog design and your use of manga.

Regarding the post, it feels great to be in love...

Sankoobaba said...

When you came life,
was complete..

jhakkas poem!!

damn good... V-Day poem !!

ambiguous_angel said...

very nice:)

An Ordinary Gal said...

having crush...feeling secure....hmmmmm..wts the matter gal ;):P

teasing apart i have to say tht it was good especially the last line :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

awwww..so cute poem...~!! i also love the pic its from clannad..!! ^_^

Sorcerer said...

good one!

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

You know what, I am in love with this short, hopeful, lovely, beautiful, heartfelt, warm poem. :-)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Dev
thank you :)

@ Kelvin
hehe! Thanks! :)
*blush blush :P

@ Nipun
Nope!!!!!!
Love and me???? never!!!!

@ minnie runner
nope!!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Sundeep
thank you :))

@ Sankoo baba
sach me??? are u serious?

@ Ambiguous angel
thank you :)

@ Riya
kuch nahi hai yaar!!!!!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Ayu
thanks gal! :)

@ Sorcy
thanks! :)

@ Vittaldas
really??? koi mistake nahi tha???
awww.. thank you sooooooo much!

tristarfivestar said...

wow cool hidden talent you got there!!!!

Sankoobaba said...

yes..
its a good poem to give to someone..really

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Tristarfivestar
thanks! :D

@ Sankoo baba
thank you :)

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

When the heart is pure the poem is pure too. I really do not care about the mistakes if the emotions are strong and to state a fact, mujhe koi galti nazar nahin aayi, perhaps, because I am into it and feeling every word here. So, again, wonderful lines. It has touched me.

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Vittaldas
thanks a million! ^_^