Monday, January 18, 2010

"when you came.."

Hearts sings a song,
eyes need your smile,
don't know why do I feel so?
 hopes giggle again,
sadness shatters somewhere;
to find a new me,
why do I walk towards you?
feels so secure..
when you are near..
hold my hand,
and be like that forever..
you were the missin' piece
When you came; life,
was complete..

18 comments:

DayDreamer said...

Hey Shriti...

Dis is beautiful!!

:-)

kelvin s.m. said...

O, very sweet... [like chocolates and you!!!:P]

Good day!!!:)

>Kelvin

Unknown said...

hmmmm..
A romantic piece.
are u in love choco?
Gud work anyways..

Cheers

Nuts

Anonymous said...

So, you already found you missing piece?

sjmach said...

I really like your blog design and your use of manga.

Regarding the post, it feels great to be in love...

sanket kambli said...

When you came life,
was complete..

jhakkas poem!!

damn good... V-Day poem !!

YAM said...

very nice:)

Ordinary Gal said...

having crush...feeling secure....hmmmmm..wts the matter gal ;):P

teasing apart i have to say tht it was good especially the last line :)

Sorcerer said...

good one!

itsyvitsy said...

You know what, I am in love with this short, hopeful, lovely, beautiful, heartfelt, warm poem. :-)

Shriti said...

@ Dev
thank you :)

@ Kelvin
hehe! Thanks! :)
*blush blush :P

@ Nipun
Nope!!!!!!
Love and me???? never!!!!

@ minnie runner
nope!!

Shriti said...

@ Sundeep
thank you :))

@ Sankoo baba
sach me??? are u serious?

@ Ambiguous angel
thank you :)

@ Riya
kuch nahi hai yaar!!!!!

Shriti said...

@ Ayu
thanks gal! :)

@ Sorcy
thanks! :)

@ Vittaldas
really??? koi mistake nahi tha???
awww.. thank you sooooooo much!

UGLYRAED said...

wow cool hidden talent you got there!!!!

sanket kambli said...

yes..
its a good poem to give to someone..really

Shriti said...

@ Tristarfivestar
thanks! :D

@ Sankoo baba
thank you :)

itsyvitsy said...

When the heart is pure the poem is pure too. I really do not care about the mistakes if the emotions are strong and to state a fact, mujhe koi galti nazar nahin aayi, perhaps, because I am into it and feeling every word here. So, again, wonderful lines. It has touched me.

Shriti said...

@ Vittaldas
thanks a million! ^_^