Hearts sings a song,
eyes need your smile,
don't know why do I feel so?
hopes giggle again,sadness shatters somewhere;
to find a new me,
why do I walk towards you?
feels so secure..
when you are near..
hold my hand,
and be like that forever..
you were the missin' piece
When you came; life,
was complete..
18 comments:
Hey Shriti...
Dis is beautiful!!
:-)
O, very sweet... [like chocolates and you!!!:P]
Good day!!!:)
>Kelvin
hmmmm..
A romantic piece.
are u in love choco?
Gud work anyways..
Cheers
Nuts
So, you already found you missing piece?
I really like your blog design and your use of manga.
Regarding the post, it feels great to be in love...
When you came life,
was complete..
jhakkas poem!!
damn good... V-Day poem !!
very nice:)
having crush...feeling secure....hmmmmm..wts the matter gal ;):P
teasing apart i have to say tht it was good especially the last line :)
good one!
You know what, I am in love with this short, hopeful, lovely, beautiful, heartfelt, warm poem. :-)
@ Dev
thank you :)
@ Kelvin
hehe! Thanks! :)
*blush blush :P
@ Nipun
Nope!!!!!!
Love and me???? never!!!!
@ minnie runner
nope!!
@ Sundeep
thank you :))
@ Sankoo baba
sach me??? are u serious?
@ Ambiguous angel
thank you :)
@ Riya
kuch nahi hai yaar!!!!!
@ Ayu
thanks gal! :)
@ Sorcy
thanks! :)
@ Vittaldas
really??? koi mistake nahi tha???
awww.. thank you sooooooo much!
wow cool hidden talent you got there!!!!
yes..
its a good poem to give to someone..really
@ Tristarfivestar
thanks! :D
@ Sankoo baba
thank you :)
When the heart is pure the poem is pure too. I really do not care about the mistakes if the emotions are strong and to state a fact, mujhe koi galti nazar nahin aayi, perhaps, because I am into it and feeling every word here. So, again, wonderful lines. It has touched me.
@ Vittaldas
thanks a million! ^_^
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