That was really romantic..awesome work..Nuts
aww that was sooo great! LOVED IT!
Thats really nice..keep writing more..:)
ah..thats really sweet..you're 16 and you can write that well..i wonder where this feelings are coming from.anyway, its a nice post:)
that was sweet:)
i am sorry to repeat what everyone has said...but that was indeed very sweet....especially coming from a 16 year old....no matter how jealous maths gets or how mad physics and chemistry become do give writing a chance.... :Dhappy new year!!!
Wonderfully done with a delicate touch of love and innocence... great one!!!:)Well, i still had a great new year although my mom was experiencing a li'l health problem.... i'm still positively thinking she'll be fine...!!!:) thanks for your concern...!!!:)>Keep safe!!!:D~Kelvin
This one was truly amazing...hands in hands. Nice piece of work.
This one is highly romantic, sweet, hopeful and soulful. Nicely done.I feel some restructuring to your poem can create a better punch. Detach "Hands in hands" from the stanzas - let the line (and anything that follows) come separate as I feel that it is much better off to keep them by themselves. It will then look like the lyrics for a wonderful song. :-)But truly, you have done this one very nicely. It touched my heart.
sweet and nice :)
romantic lines and fantastic!!
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ww...so sweet!! The picture goes so well with the post. :)Keep writing!!Check out my post!
hey..another awesome work~! so sweet..i wish i can also experience that sigh* *wishful* keep it up :3
hey!! hats off to miss creative.. u amaze! K m back.. and charged up..last exam is on 7th Jan.Then I am gonna be really free like a bird!Cheerio :)and thanks a lot!
hey! hats off miss creative.. u amaze me a lot! k last exam is on 7th then m free like a bird!thanks a tonne!Cheerio :)god bless ya!
ekdum jhakaas!!especially.."Music starts here,Melody stays near, when,Hands in hands..."really good..keep it up..and a bit late wishes..happy new year..may 2010 be year of smiles, fun , no tension, adventure, love and lots of chocolates!!!
this is cute :)
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