My soul betrayed me,
My tears cursed me,
My eyes so tired,
Smile hates me;
Heart cries,
for death.
My only,
Friend is lonliness.
Life's turning so miserable;
Love sinkin' in,
darkness.
Sorrow giggles,
on my helplessness.
May be that's in my fate;May that's what I deserve.
Have to bear this till the end.
PS. check out the previous 100th post :) Trust me it's for you :)
21 comments:
heyy comeon u deserve much more ,,,,
dark emtions at yur best!
you have a way to put into words the deeper emotions..
good one!
so sad:(
but very well written!
ohh dear...it was really nice
@ AYU
thanks! :)
@ AMAN
thank you :)
@ Hary
Thank you :)
@ Sorcy
thanks! :)
@ Angel
thank you! :)
@ Riya
thank you! :)
Wot happened dear. You alright na. I'm first time here.
Cheers
Randeep
u deserve better...
and forget abt death.... its gonna take a long time before it reaches u
wow!! you really put ur mood swings so well in a poem..
awesome !
dont worry nothing needs to be beared till end, it will all pass
good or bad!
:-)
hey.. this post of urs reflecting that u r sad... hope all well with u :)
Hi CL,
This one is so dark... but amazed at the emotions portrayed... well done!!!:)
P.S. I forgot to say on my previous comment: thank you for your sweetness and kind gestures... you're really a nice and cool buddy!!!:D
Good day!!!:)
>Kelvin
Lonely? Depressed? Broken Hearted? Back when I was in highschool, I normally burst out my feelings through poems =)
"My only,
Friend is lonliness."
"Sorrow giggles,
on my helplessness."
very good poem...esp. the above lines..keep it up!!
@ Randeep
May be :|
welcome to my blog :D
@ Rishi
awww... thank you :)
@ Funkyrave
thank you! ^_^
@ Divya
thanks! :)
@ Kelvin
thank you and welcome! :)
@ Minnie runner
hi! thanks for stoping by leaving a comment ^_^
@ Sankoo baba
thank you :)
sad and nostalgic.. but nice!^_^
Poem is too sad Shree..and you completed 100 posts?? I am Jealous :(
@ Tharangni
thanks dear! :)
@ Mahesh bhaiya
haha! nice :P
beautiful as usual :)
oh..that's a dark one..hmm
nice usage of words, dear
@ Ayu
thanks!
@ pooja
thank u!
@ Vidya
thanks! :)
Hey Dear,
Just read ur poem...so touchy...and so true...
Thanks. This one will stay close to my heart. keep writing and keep expressing...
Stay Happy & Smile...
Cheers,
Priya :)
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