The bond between,
me and you shines,
more than gold..
I have to steal,all your tears;
I will fight from,
all your fears;
I am aware of,
your heart which,
cries every moment;
I am aware of ,your eagerness;
to find happiness;Trust me,
life isn't so miserable;
I am here for you,
I won't let you,
to cry anymore,
Share sorrows with me,
I promise, I would,
never let it,
to come again,
I would bring joy,
back in your life..
25 comments:
speechless..
some real serious work..:)
Cheers
Nuts
kewl i like your poetry more cuz i found out that they are really personal and from your heart!
See thats what I am talking abt.... u cant stop writing,...... :) like it!!
Good work Shriti!!
very good poem..
aptly describes the title..
the beauty of this poem is that its not necessarily for lovers..it can be for friends..or ...
versatile.
Maybe I read a bit of Suzumiya Haruhi too much... but this one hit my head out cold. (Sweet Dreams anyone O_o ?? )
Well, I suddenly remembered that I had made a song with the same title O_o ...
Lyrics were naturally different (and not authored by me :P I just made the music)
Ya... I posted it on my blog too. Give it a try if you may ->
http://seleniums-world.blogspot.com/2008/03/creation-by-chance.html
I don't consider my Lyrics to be at par though... -__-;
But thanks for reminding me :)
I completely forgot my own creation
nice one
nice one..
t'was a heartwarming promise :)
Lovely!
I enjoyed reading it.
Keep up the great work! =D
superb dear...really very very nice :)
Hi CL,
That's really sweet... and so many promises to raise... nice one!!!:)
Keep safe!!:D
>Kelvin
go for the poetry ms. choclet ^^
I agree with Nipun
the lines are awesome.
Beautifully written dear one, beautifully written.
The feelings are so true and unpretentious. They are so unadulterated and genuine. Beautiful. The emotions are there for everyone to fathom.
I wish there was a "Like" link like in Facebook so I could give it a thumbs up. :-)
@ Nipun
thank you! ^^
@ Tristarfivestar
Thanks buddy! :)
@ Rohit
thank you! :)
@ Dev
Thanks! ^^
@ Sankoobaba
thank you :)
@ Selenium
thanks buddy!
sweet dreams!!
@ Rishi
thank you! :)
@ Vidya
thanks! :)
@ minnie runner
Thanks! ^_^
@ Moonlight
thank you! :)
@ Riya
thanks! :)
@ Kelvin
hi buddy!
Thank you! :)
@ Glenn
thanks glenn! :)
@ Sorcy
thank you ^^
@ Vittaldas
thank you! ^_^
@ Ayu
thanks dear! :)
You know, I can totally feel what you post. There are like a print out of my life!
You write really very well. Loved your poem!!!
Take care :)
Very nice :)
*applaud*
Very sweet. Touched my heart.
Keep it up!!
ohhh beautiful
@ Juhi
thank you :)
@ Pankhuri
thanks! :)
@ Shas
thank you :)
@ Sulagna di
thank you di! :)
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