It hurts when you,
stay with someone else,
How can one smile when
life's ending in despair;
Want to smile but
enchanting and nostalgic,
memories gives tears.
How to tell you, my fears
Eyes glitters, hand shivers,
So afraid to tell the world,
about the darkness.
Lifelessness cries in loneliness,
Still you want me to fly,
'am not afraid of falling but
afraid of losing you forever;
Would you hold my hand,
to show the way to life,
won't you be promising me,
for being together;
heart sinkin' to the bottom,
and no one knows the emptiness;
bleeding eyes with numbness,
taking me to a world,
Where I can't feel you anymore;
Now the demon has arrived,
to take my lfe..
21 comments:
nice..nice!
@ Ayu
thanks! ^_^
@ Sorcy
thank you! ^_^
:(
that's sad.
cheer up:)
but BTW, its nicely written:)
-as usual..
@ angel
thanks! :)
Sad. But the way u expressed.. superb. Keep it up.
Cheers
Randeep
Touched my heart.
Keep it up!!
good work once again..
BTW how old are u??
Cheers
Nuts
"How to tell you, my fears"
and
"'am not afraid of falling but
afraid of loosing you forever;"
kind of descriptive of a few things in my life...
beautiful!!
keep it up!!
beautiful poem as usual :)
Into poetry mode? :)
I absolutely love your blog....its beautifully madeeeeeeeeee
uuummmm.. nice again!!:)
sad ho gaye padh k :(
"Afraid of losing you forever" - that struck me!
@ Randeep
thank you! :)
@ Shas
thanks! ^_^
@ Nipun
haha! sweet sixteen!! :P
shocked??
@ Sankoo baba
thank you ^_^
@ Pooja
thanks! ^_^
@ Quest
haha! yup! :D
@ Sapna
hi! welcome to my blog.
'am glad that you liked my blog!
@ Pria
thanks! ^_^
@ Sulagna di
sorry di! :(
didn't want to make anyone sad
@ minnie runner
thank you! ^_^
yeah!
obviously shocked..
U dont sound like one..
When I was of ur age I cudnt even think this much...:)
sad one nicely written again..
Change 'loosing' to 'losing'..a small spelling mistake.
@ Nipun
hahahaha! ;)
@ Vidya
thank you! ^_^
Some strong words you have here! Phew! Too dark, but nice too. :-)
@ Vittaldas
thank you! :)
Hi CL,
Captivating. Moving. Enchanting. Ameliorating. Well done!!!:)
Keep safe!!!:D
>Kelvin
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