no one will be there. but everyone will be there to give hate when you need love..trivial..free
i guess you are forgetting about some special people of ur life...ur parents, ur cousins, ur best friends...they will be always there for u..no matter what !!nice blog btw..u just got a new follower for it ;)
@ soinhehehe :)@ rahilyeah you r right..lol it was a fiction :)and thank you so much :))
I kinda loved this post :)and yeah,wish ya very happy belated birthday,may god bless you with best of everything girl :)was outta station,thats why couldn't come online. :(
Definitely you would have people to hold you, take care of you, encourage you, make you smile and wipe away your tears..just look around and you would find them..Here is praying that god bestow with friends and people who would always be there for you in your good times and bad..The poem is very touching..Keep smiling..:-)
Friends will be there, because they care.Everyone has a pain to share.It is true that there are worries bountiful,but,Look around,feel, for life is so beautiful.oh!, I just rhymed it. :)
Tis is life....!!Lovely lines!!
Hmmmm such a sad poem....Rhythm was maintained till the end very well and meaning was there but very much in the pessimistic way.Ther should have been some end to it in the end of the poem..Good one gal :)whats ur name? i never heard it yet :Pcheersmahesh
hey am new here...got u from mohits blog..well written...quite some emo stuff attached eh??
just a fic rite?but it was way too pessimistic..and well its a sad reality,but yup,the is a way out..and there indeed wl be some persons to stand by :) good work there..
@ sunakshi dithanks di.. :))its okay :)@ daydreameryeah i have them :)they are always with me and will be :)thank you
@ sunilyup true :))@ Rohit thank you :))@ MaheshThank you :)Well you have two choice..you can call me shriti or shri :)
@ MadhuHi nice to see u herethanks for dropping :))@ ShravanThanksYeah it was a fiction :)about being pessimistic.. sorry coz that's the way i think.. but am trying to be an optimist..
hey dear... what happend baby ??no one will be thr ..but yaa u have urself, whihc is more than enough to solve any problm.. enjoyy..keep smiling...
@ Prams dinothing di.. I am fine :)don't worry :))
no one? :) friends family sab gayab ho gaye kya? :Pand if no one, u console urself best too!
@ leohehehe sab hai yaar.. aur humesha rahenge ;p thanks
quite emo indeed...yes as Soin says...everyone will be ther to giv hate..
@ haryyeah true :))
nice one :)
@ A SHi, thanks for dropping by..glad you liked it :)
hi!nicely written.. try expanding the poem a little more and give it an ending like a story...then it would be perfect:)best wishes..
@ vidyahi thanx for dropping by..and yeah sure i'll do it :)
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