Wednesday, November 4, 2009

"Dying.."

....
I am sick of crying,
Tired of trying,
Broke me when I was flying,
They think I am lieing,
Yeah I am still smiling
 But inside 'am dying..

8 comments:

soin said...

are u trying to put a sad pj til tr??if you dont know tr google for t rajendhar..free

Sunakshi said...

Hey,why such sad post?

is anything wrong?

cheer up gal! :)

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

That was so simple and realistic poem :)

Good one..feelings are shouting in the poem

Cheers

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

that was simple and original, but a much discussed theme :)

chocolate lover said...

@ soin
sorry I really didn't get you..

@sunakshi di
nothing happened don't worry.. these lines just came in my mind.

@mahesh
thank you :)

@shravan
:)thanx

Sunakshi said...

*phew*,nice post any way :)

Leo said...

u sure dont sound like a 15 yr old gal Shriti. such pain and thoughtful words come from more older ones usually i think :D :)

chocolate lover said...

@ sunakshi di
thank you :)

@ leo
thanx :).. I'll be 16 after two days ;p