Thursday, November 5, 2009

"Eyes"


Wanna know about,
Then look into my eyes,
They are scared of lies..
See how they shout..


When something hurts,
Or something happens bad,
Or when 'am sad..
They just spurts..


Seems like am close to destruction,
but still wondering is it the end,
Better to close it before my friend..
To float in the sorrow ocean..

[P.S. really sorry for another negative post]

10 comments:

DayDreamer said...

This is a very touching post..

Thanks for visiting my blog and leaving your comments!!

Shravan said...

just cold? right? tc.. and wow.. that was cool.. i dont make a lenghty comment often.. so lemme tell u just this, loved the ending ! :) tc girl !

rimz said...

hmmm very nice.
EYES...wil kip an eye...:)

Sunakshi said...

Eyes are the true speaker.

Good one,loved it ^_^

keep writing,tc :)

aritra the daydreamer said...

nice one.....but write something cheerful..... like ur posts about your life.they r so sweet and funny

Leo said...

very lovely thoughts. so well expressed. good one! :)

sulagna chatterjee said...

you always amaze me wiht your understanding of subjects so clear!! nice one kiddo :)

PS: I got my eyes on you

chocolate lover said...

@ day dreamer
thanx for dropping by... do come again :)

@ shravan
thank you :)

@ rimz di
thank you :)

@ sunakshi di
thank you :)


@ aritra
thank you :) and yeah sure

@ leo
thanx :)

@ sulagna di
lol thanx :)

Being Pramoda... said...

excellent work done by u sis...especially in bringing out ur emotions.. i loved the way u have caaried the punch...

Lovelyyy

chocolate lover said...

@ prams di
thank you di :)