Friday, November 27, 2009

"I cry.."


Why do I cry?
When someone hurts me, I cry..
When something happen bad, I cry..
It makes me feel sad and alone in my own world....

When a friend betrays me, I cry..
When everyone uses me, I cry..
Am I in this world for others..
to make the most of me...


When it is the time to say good bye, I cry..
The feeling of loosing my loved ones is so dreadful that, I cry..
Do they feel the same for me..
what I feel for them...

I cry, I don't know why..... I just cry........

[P.S. It was my first poem.. I wrote it during my last vaccations]

9 comments:

sakhi said...

lovely blog!!

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

whoa..i know what you feel..i am a cry baby..and i always tend to cry even when reading a touching story..haha..i like your poem..very much..^_^

HaRy!! said...

ooo just my opinion..but i feel i tend to get weak when i cry...! neverthless its the best heal

HaRy

Sunakshi said...

sweet one :)

chocolate lover said...

@ sakshi
thanx :)

@ ayumi
me too dear thanx :)

@ hary
haha same pinch :P

@ sunakshi di
thanx :))

PULKIT said...

take care sweets!!

chocolate lover said...

@ pulkit
thanks :))

Sankoobaba said...

very very good for first poem

chocolate lover said...

@ Sankoo baba
thanx :))