Friday, November 12, 2010

"..my coffin.."

Misty eyes staring at with sour heart;
Won't matter me; keep tryin' tearin' it apart.
The same red heart may smile,
for a while.
in loneliness rather,
for love and care.
And in moon light my soul may cry,
and miss togetherness and sigh.

Every surface beauty attracts you,
and I'm blindly building my dreams new.
I feel like I was born to fly,
but everyone else made my life a lie.
I dance on my own rhytm,
and I feel pain 'cause I'm not numb.
And this solitary moment,
just seem pleasant.

I wished you to be here,
But I know that you aren't near.
I wait for your smile, your glance,
call it insanity but it enhance,
my bitterness more and more.
How to tell, I completely adore
you in every situation,
your one rose would be enough near my coffin.

11 comments:

Gauri Mathur said...

Heyy!!
How you doing??
Nice blog template!!
:)

Leona said...

I'm not saying it was bad, I was just saying it wasn't a poem. @-)

rantravereflect/ jane said...

i like teh last line, just very melancholic!

Madhu said...

ur title scares me.

Sumit Sarkar said...

Very well done...full of emotions.. :)

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Alka Gurha said...

Hi dear...I love chocolates too but alas ...hmmm I am not young. I mean not as young as you....Keep writing and keep eating...chocolates that is.

Selenium said...

As usual... the flow of this one is excellent. And complex emotion of loneliness and calmness mixed in well described too...

Anurag said...

hey,

lovely words, it feels so good to read your poems.
" Every surface beauty attracts you,and I'm blindly building my dreams new.I feel like I was born to fly,but everyone else made my life a lie."
nice lines. ^-^

Cheryl: Oh to Be a Muse said...

i think your poem and the photo really go well together. nice choice and great post.

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sulagna ™ said...

shriiii...girl dont write such titles ..it scared the hell outa me...hugsss