Its hard to tell you,
what I've got to say,
Neither tears stop,
nor the smile,
stays..
No more betrayals,
no more partings;
Lips so numb,
eye's so scared,
now my life has
changed;
I wish if you could
understand;
Understand the thing,
That I have got to say;
But now I have to
decieve you,
so that atleast
you can smile..
P.S. from the draft.
P.P.S. Happy holi guys :))
19 comments:
painful
love should never be like this
*touchwood*
:((
happy holi to u toooo...
I guess that's one face of Love that we see in today's day and age. -__-
Good writing, Shriti
Helloooooooooo...how do u do it in words so few...????
And yet come up with thoughts so true...:-))
Happy holi to u too choco...n wish u all the colours of love n joy:-)
Hi CL,
Dark yet very vividly expressed!!! well done!!!:)
Good day!!!:)
>Kelvin
:) Sad. still well written.
My comment made you smile? ;)
Cheers
Randeep
ow:(
Sad yet beautifully written :)Happy Holi :)
thats sad...reminds me of the some terdrops on my guitar by taylor swift.."i fake a smile so that he thinks i am alright"..:(
"But now I have to decieve you,so that atleast you can smile.."
that explains a part of my life.
good stuff,,keep it up!!
and yes.. you have been presented with an award..just head to my blog!!"
@ Freelancer
thanks :))
@ Ayu
thanks for the comment :))
@ Anoop
haha thanks!
happy holi!
@ Selenium
true!
@ Vidya
thank you :)
@ Suruchi
hehehe! pata nahi??!
happy holi
@ kelvin
thank you buddy :)
@ Randeep
yup! it made me smile
happy holi
@ Angel
:))
@ dreamygal
hey!
thanks for dropping by :))
keep visting
thank you :))
@ Madhu
haha! thanks!
happy holi :))
@ Sankoo baba
awwww.... thank you!
happy holi :))
Wow! There is intense feelings here. A desperate plea to be understood. Also, there is a really nice heart that is more satisfied in the happiness of this beloved who hasn't made an attempt to understand the feelings neither realizes his/her worth. Nice one.
Belated Holi wishes to you too.
You made my heart cry!
WELL DONE,U R a Gifted poet!
@ Vittaldas
glad that you liked it :))
@ Neeya
hey!
thanks for dropping by!
keep visiting. :))
touching in few words..:( hope u had a gr8 holi.. :) keep smiling :)
Hey, this is very nicely written :)
Your poems are superb, really :)
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