Wednesday, March 3, 2010

"Regretting my soul.."

Dream, just a dream, you are,
Word, just a word, love, we need to share,
Tear, just a tear, in my eye,
Smile, just a smile, told you that I lie,
Let me make a wish,
Let my dreams get wings;
Why does heart palpitate?
And why it happened so late?
Now, 'am in a dilemma,
How fortunate you are, O' fella;
'Am falling, falling in the illusion,
Aches my heart so broken;
Regretting my soul,
All alone I have to console...

9 comments:

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

aww..this is so heart-breaking :(

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Oh God! Why such painful poems from you?

Everything in this world seems so uninteresting when the heart is not at ease. The person feels so insecure and inadequate. He/she feels so helpless and hapless. No consolation will ever sooth and self consolation is far out of reach.

A really touching tale.

☆Tharangni☆ said...

reallly nice!! i like your style of old way writing like--O'Fellla!!! :D Reminds me of Shakespeare! :)

vidya said...

Beautifully woven and you are very imaginative!

WINDOWLAD said...

...very dark and sad... i wonder where you get all the emotions raised in this poem... i'm deeply moved in soo much agony... excellent!!!:)

Have a blessed day!!!:)

Keep safe!!!:)

>Kelvin

Rinkal said...

really nice1i liked it:)
keep writtingnad now i am your follower

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Ayu
:) thankiyu!

@ Vittaldas
hehe! I don't know but I like such poems :)

@ Tharangni
haha! thanks dear :))

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Vidya
thank you :))

@ Kelvin
hmmm.. God knows why do I write such poems :P
glad you liked it :))

@ Rinkal
thank you :))
hope to see you around :))

Shreya said...

aww..sho shweet ur blog is really very nice and sweet :) touching poems and cutu pics :)

keep up the good work ..

Best of luck {to a bong from another bong ;) }