Dream, just a dream, you are,
Word, just a word, love, we need to share,
Tear, just a tear, in my eye,
Smile, just a smile, told you that I lie,
Let me make a wish,
Why does heart palpitate?
And why it happened so late?
Now, 'am in a dilemma,
How fortunate you are, O' fella;
'Am falling, falling in the illusion,
Aches my heart so broken;
Regretting my soul,
All alone I have to console...
8 comments:
Oh God! Why such painful poems from you?
Everything in this world seems so uninteresting when the heart is not at ease. The person feels so insecure and inadequate. He/she feels so helpless and hapless. No consolation will ever sooth and self consolation is far out of reach.
A really touching tale.
reallly nice!! i like your style of old way writing like--O'Fellla!!! :D Reminds me of Shakespeare! :)
Beautifully woven and you are very imaginative!
...very dark and sad... i wonder where you get all the emotions raised in this poem... i'm deeply moved in soo much agony... excellent!!!:)
Have a blessed day!!!:)
Keep safe!!!:)
>Kelvin
really nice1i liked it:)
keep writtingnad now i am your follower
@ Ayu
:) thankiyu!
@ Vittaldas
hehe! I don't know but I like such poems :)
@ Tharangni
haha! thanks dear :))
@ Vidya
thank you :))
@ Kelvin
hmmm.. God knows why do I write such poems :P
glad you liked it :))
@ Rinkal
thank you :))
hope to see you around :))
aww..sho shweet ur blog is really very nice and sweet :) touching poems and cutu pics :)
keep up the good work ..
Best of luck {to a bong from another bong ;) }
Post a Comment