Monday, March 8, 2010

"Whimpering soul"

I've found myself in despair,
I know not how much you care;
My fate, my dreams,
My smile, my screams;
Eyes too heavy,
Tears of blood I cry;
A falsifying affection;
you brought in life.
My fairytale you were,
Wish upon a star you were;
The only thing spared are those,
bleeding memories and a,
whimpering soul..

p.s. It was my 125th blog post :)


ambiguous_angel said...

and the 125th post is beautiful.
well, kinda sad but very well written:)

An Ordinary Gal said...

Congrats for 125th Post. It was nice :)

Chandrika Shubham said...

Congrates on 125th post! :) Beautifully written. :)

Best wises. :)

Nipun said...

congos dear!!
u are really fabulous..:)

Keep writing..

125 ain't fun..
Lovely poem.



Chocolate Lover said...

@ Ambiguous angel
thank you! :)

@ Riya
thank you! :)

@ Chandrika Shubham
thank you! :)
keep visiting! :)

@ Nipun
thankiyu! :))

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Very nice poem. It is a very nice flow to it. Liked it very much.

nil said...

Hey, quite a nice blog you've got out there!
and hey , congrats on the 125th post!
Happy blogging! :)
Hope to see you on my page sometime!

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

happy 125th post~!!

the poem is bloody nice :)

Tripat "Prerna" said... is really a gr8 achievement. do keep on writing such wonderful poems :)

suruchi said...

Hey Congratulations!
A journey well done..Cheers:-)

But quit being sad...let's laugh in the face of all troubles till troubles get troubled n run away;-)

vidya said...

Congrats on ur 125th:)
Nice poem there!

et said...

And all aside, why'd u chose a sad poem for the 125th> celebrations?! :)

Sorcerer said...

125 and couting..

keep em coming...

and as usual.. well penned!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Vittaldas
glad you liked it :)

@ nil
hey thanks for dropping by
and yeah sure i'll definately visit your blog :))

@ Ayu
thanks dear :))

@ Tripat prerna
thank you! :)

@ Suruchi
thankiyu!! :)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Vidya
thankiyu! :))

@ et
emmmm... I don't know why but I always write sad poems! ;)
thankiyu! for dropping by :)

@ Sorcy

Pria said...

wohooo.. congratulations!!

Sankoobaba said...

perfect rhyme...keep it up!! congrats for 125 th post!

Sjmach said...

Congrats on your 125 post and well written!!

Rinkal said...

and poem is little sad but fabulous:)

☆Tharangni☆ said...

wow!!! niceee!!! :)
AA or Double A -Awesome Again! :D


....a wonderful read... i really liked the emotions engraved in every words... great... great... job!!!:D


P.S. sorry for the late visit... and thank you for your appreciations on my haikus!!!:D

Good day!!!:)

Keep safe!!!:)



P.P.S. Congratulations for the 125th post... worth a read!!!:D


Chocolate Lover said...

@ Pria
thanks! :))

@ Sankoo baba
thank you! :)

@ Sandeep
thanks! :)

@ Tharangni
thank you dear! :)

@ Rinkal
haha! I write sad poems mostly!
thank you for appreciating it :)

@ Kelvin
Thank you soooooo much buddy!
and its okay! :D

Randeep said...

Hey Nicely written. Fake feelings. Broken dreams. Crying soul. hmmm.. Hope you are alright. Keep smiling dear.


Quest said...

Kids are leaving me far behind in the number of posts :(

WarmSunshine said...

hey there choco girl... i made a new blog :)

hope u visit soon!


Chocolate Lover said...

@ Randeep
dont worry 'am fine :)

@ Quest
hehehehe! hurry up :P

@ Warm sunshine
I will :)

Rinkal said...

yar u write sad poems write one happy smiling poem and make me laugh if u can
u cant becaus i often laugh:)