I've found myself in despair,
I know not how much you care;
My fate, my dreams,
My smile, my screams;
Eyes too heavy,
Tears of blood I cry;
A falsifying affection;
you brought in life.
My fairytale you were,
Wish upon a star you were;
The only thing spared are those,
bleeding memories and a,
whimpering soul..
p.s. It was my 125th blog post :)
The only thing spared are those,
bleeding memories and a,
whimpering soul..
p.s. It was my 125th blog post :)
27 comments:
and the 125th post is beautiful.
well, kinda sad but very well written:)
Congrats for 125th Post. It was nice :)
Congrates on 125th post! :) Beautifully written. :)
Best wises. :)
congos dear!!
u are really fabulous..:)
Keep writing..
125 ain't fun..
Lovely poem.
Cheers
Nuts
@ Ambiguous angel
thank you! :)
@ Riya
thank you! :)
@ Chandrika Shubham
thank you! :)
keep visiting! :)
@ Nipun
thankiyu! :))
Very nice poem. It is a very nice flow to it. Liked it very much.
Hey, quite a nice blog you've got out there!
and hey , congrats on the 125th post!
Happy blogging! :)
Hope to see you on my page sometime!
wow..it is really a gr8 achievement. do keep on writing such wonderful poems :)
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Hey Congratulations!
A journey well done..Cheers:-)
But quit being sad...let's laugh in the face of all troubles till troubles get troubled n run away;-)
HUGSSSSSSSSSSSSSS:-)
Congrats on ur 125th:)
Nice poem there!
And all aside, why'd u chose a sad poem for the 125th> celebrations?! :)
125...
125 and couting..
keep em coming...
and as usual.. well penned!
@ Vittaldas
aww...
glad you liked it :)
@ nil
hey thanks for dropping by
and yeah sure i'll definately visit your blog :))
@ Ayu
thanks dear :))
@ Tripat prerna
thank you! :)
@ Suruchi
thankiyu!! :)
@ Vidya
thankiyu! :))
@ et
emmmm... I don't know why but I always write sad poems! ;)
thankiyu! for dropping by :)
@ Sorcy
thankiyu!
wohooo.. congratulations!!
perfect rhyme...keep it up!! congrats for 125 th post!
Congrats on your 125 post and well written!!
congrats:)
and poem is little sad but fabulous:)
wow!!! niceee!!! :)
AA or Double A -Awesome Again! :D
....a wonderful read... i really liked the emotions engraved in every words... great... great... job!!!:D
Cheers!!!:D
P.S. sorry for the late visit... and thank you for your appreciations on my haikus!!!:D
Good day!!!:)
Keep safe!!!:)
>Kelvin
P.P.S. Congratulations for the 125th post... worth a read!!!:D
>Kelvin
@ Pria
thanks! :))
@ Sankoo baba
thank you! :)
@ Sandeep
thanks! :)
@ Tharangni
thank you dear! :)
@ Rinkal
haha! I write sad poems mostly!
thank you for appreciating it :)
@ Kelvin
Thank you soooooo much buddy!
and its okay! :D
Hey Nicely written. Fake feelings. Broken dreams. Crying soul. hmmm.. Hope you are alright. Keep smiling dear.
Cheers
Randeep
Kids are leaving me far behind in the number of posts :(
;)
hey there choco girl... i made a new blog :)
hope u visit soon!
tc!
@ Randeep
dont worry 'am fine :)
@ Quest
hehehehe! hurry up :P
@ Warm sunshine
I will :)
yar u write sad poems write one happy smiling poem and make me laugh if u can
u cant becaus i often laugh:)
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