Sunday, February 28, 2010

"I've got to say.."

Its hard to tell you,
what I've got to say,
Neither tears stop,
nor the smile,
No more betrayals,
no more partings;
Lips so numb,
eye's so scared,
now my life has
I wish if you could
Understand the thing,
That I have got to say;
But now I have to
decieve you,
so that atleast
you can smile..

P.S. from the draft.
P.P.S. Happy holi guys :))


freelancer said...


love should never be like this

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

another sad one :(

Anoop said...


happy holi to u toooo...

Selenium said...

I guess that's one face of Love that we see in today's day and age. -__-

vidya said...

Good writing, Shriti

suruchi said... do u do it in words so few...????
And yet come up with thoughts so true...:-))
Happy holi to u too choco...n wish u all the colours of love n joy:-)


Hi CL,

Dark yet very vividly expressed!!! well done!!!:)

Good day!!!:)


Randeep said...

:) Sad. still well written.
My comment made you smile? ;)


ambiguous_angel said...


Anonymous said...

Sad yet beautifully written :)Happy Holi :)

Madhu said...

thats sad...reminds me of the some terdrops on my guitar by taylor swift.."i fake a smile so that he thinks i am alright"..:(

Sankoobaba said...

"But now I have to decieve you,so that atleast you can smile.."

that explains a part of my life.
good stuff,,keep it up!!

and yes.. you have been presented with an award..just head to my blog!!"

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Freelancer
thanks :))

@ Ayu
thanks for the comment :))

@ Anoop
haha thanks!
happy holi!

@ Selenium

@ Vidya
thank you :)

@ Suruchi
hehehe! pata nahi??!
happy holi

@ kelvin
thank you buddy :)

@ Randeep
yup! it made me smile
happy holi

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Angel

@ dreamygal
thanks for dropping by :))
keep visting
thank you :))

@ Madhu
haha! thanks!
happy holi :))

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Sankoo baba
awwww.... thank you!
happy holi :))

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Wow! There is intense feelings here. A desperate plea to be understood. Also, there is a really nice heart that is more satisfied in the happiness of this beloved who hasn't made an attempt to understand the feelings neither realizes his/her worth. Nice one.

Belated Holi wishes to you too.

Anonymous said...

You made my heart cry!
WELL DONE,U R a Gifted poet!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Vittaldas
glad that you liked it :))

@ Neeya
thanks for dropping by!
keep visiting. :))

Pria said...

touching in few words..:( hope u had a gr8 holi.. :) keep smiling :)

Koo said...

Hey, this is very nicely written :)
Your poems are superb, really :)