Sunday, February 7, 2010

Random "why?"

Why don't the stars weep?
Why don't the moon melt?
Why one has to die?
and why the others have to cry?
Why do they love?
Why do they care?
Why 'am deceiving?
and Why I am not the same?
Why don't they understand?
Why 'am alone once again when
everyone is here to hold my hand?


Selenium said...

Good use of the word "Why?"
Liked the contradictory last lines.

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Selenium
thank you! :))

karan a said...

Thats the story of people living in Urban cities... very short and meaningful poetry... ;)

Divya said...

how cn u be alone? u ve blog world arnd :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

that's a nice poem~!!i like your usage of why and the irony of the question and its innocence~!! :D

(P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)

Nipun said...

This is the beauty of life...
Different masalas every time...:)
So my dear say "Why not"



Chocolate Lover said...

@ Karan
thank you! :)

@ Divya
thanks! :)

@ Ayu
thank you ayu :))

@ Nipun
haha! okay! :))

Shruti Mukundan said...

amazing work!! kudos!!

Sankoobaba said...

yup.. u r not alone

Sorcerer said...

good work..and well said

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

So many "Why"s. Why? ;-)

Nice one, except I didn't understand the usage of "Why 'am decieving?". Did you mean "Why 'am being deceived?" or did you really mean you are sort of elusive? I think you meant the former guessing from the tone of the poem and notice the spelling of 'deceive' ;-). Overall, a really random Why, but this is the sort of randomness one feels.

ambiguous_angel said...

nice one.

so many why's..
sometimes we cant help but ask.

but not everything has an answer..

Madhu said...

argh...these questions irk me too!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Shruti
thanks for dropping by.
glad you liked it :))
Keep visiting

@ Sankoo baba
but still I feel that 'am alone! >_<

@ Sorcy
thanks! :))

@ Vittaldas
well I meant the later one >_<
any ways thank you :))

@ Angel
awww. thanks! :))

@ Madhu
*sigh! :|