Deep meaning... is she suffering from something or is she shunned by the world because of her appearance or, did I get it wrong!
Ah...The girl/lady you refer to in this poem... She's not the only one to feel like that in this present world.
But she should know that there are people who feel the same way as she does!
you know what ? I always thought the same when i was in school...same feelings...i can relate with each and every line. you have written it very nicely :)
Shriti, are you sure you are 16? This seemed so deep for a gal so young! It's real beautiful wordplay dear. Fantastic write-up! :)
sad one.but beautiful indeed.
i m touched deep inside
Loved it :)
aww..the girl in the poem shouldn't think that way~!! totally sad one :( ( / ・ω・)//!!!(P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)
Hi CL,O, that was so 'emo'... words are really sad as if she's betrayed and rejected for so many times... i think you're really good at sad poems... great job!!!:DHey, Happy Valentine's day in advance!!!:)Good day!!!:)Keep safe!!!:)>kelvin
@ KaranYes,you got it right! :)Thanks! :))@ SeleniumThankiyu! :))@ VIdyathanks! :))@ Sandeephmmm.. true!:)@ Riyaawwww... thanks! :))@ LeoLOL yes 'am sure!Thanks a million :))
@ AngelThank you! :))@ Prernathank you! :))@ Sunakshi dithank you :))@ Ayuthank you ayu! :))@ Kelvinthanks buddy :))and Happy valentine day to you too :)@ Pria:))
she maybe alone..but no you..we all bloggers are with u..he he.. nice poem...
@ Sankoo babathankiyu! :))
i m literally shocked!Leo just said it for me.
and yes, just curious: do you watch animes - i mean too many of them?
AbhishekHaha! thank you! :))
@ AbhishekNo I don't! :P :DI know you won't believe but seriously I don't! :D
Simply amazing. You are getting better and better with time and effort. I like this piece very much. Keep writing.
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