Saturday, February 13, 2010

"Yours.."

I'll wait,
wait for the dream,
dream to come true,
True are my feelings,
Feelings that they named love,
Love is you,
You will be my valentine someday,
Someday I'll be yours,
yours forever..

P.S. Fever is killing me again!! (T_T)
P.P.S I hate medicines!!

23 comments:

☆Ths[Schrei]☆ said...

nice one!! and hey, get well soon!!! :)

Sunakshi said...

Its a *chumaishwari* poem :D

ooh dun call me copy cat,i really couldn't think of any other word than this terrance's all time favorite word to describe mind blowing piece in dance india dance :D

Happy valentines day sister :)

Selenium said...

I like this poem writing technique. I dunno what the English Profs call it... but I call it chaining or stringing of words.

"Antakshari" as we would call it in Hindi/Bangla...

Nice one :)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Tharangni
thanks gal! :))

@ Sunakshi di
LOL thankiyou :))
and same to you :))

@ Selenium
LOL I don't know either :P
Thanks BTW. :))

Sankoobaba said...

"Someday I'll be yours,
yours forever.."

just said these to someone...
really sweet n short poem!

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

thanks for this lovely poem~! it raises my hopes high~! :)

get well soon >.<

(P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

thanks for this lovely poem~! it raises my hopes high~! :)

get well soon >.<

(P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

about your comment:

*sigh* i can assume like that..life aint a fairy tale which has a happy ending :(
(P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)

N J said...

Sweet :)

ABHISHEK SiM said...

*wow*

this is beautiful. :)

get well soon choco-gal :)

and happy happy V-day :)

p.s.: thanks for visiting :)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Sankoo baba
aha! kisko bola?? batao batao! :D

@ Ayu
oh dear thank you for the comment :))
and don't worry everything will be fine :)

@ N J
thank you :)

@ Abhishek
Hi!
thank you for dropping by :))
and happy valentine day to you too :)

ambiguous_angel said...

beautiful poem.

ow. get well soon.

Sunakshi said...

hmph,its okay ya.Keey keeper is more like my personal dairy,phew* you didn't get any update.you would have been bored for sure :)

Pria said...

lovely lines.. :) take care dear..

WINDOWLAD said...

Hi CL,

This one is so sweet and positive as well... i enjoyed the read!!!:)

And hey, get well soon... take care of yourself... and don't forget to smile!!!:)

Good day!!!:)

>kelvin

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Fever is killing you and you are killing me with wonderful poems! Gosh! Where are all of these coming from? A truthful wish I see in this piece. Nice.

Nipun said...

lovely...:)

Cheers

Nuts

Gauri Mathur said...

Beautiful!:)
Get well soon!!
God Bless you
:)
Take care!

kanaguonline said...

very sweet beautiful poem.. on the Valentine's day.... :) :)

and get well soon.. :) :)

Tori said...

I love it! Get well soon!!!

Tori said...

I love it! Get well soon.

vidya said...

such a sweet poem, Shriti..loved it!

suruchi said...

"Feelings that they named love,Love is you"
BEAUUUUUUUUUUUUTIFULLY said:-)