Saturday, February 27, 2010

Unsolved mystery!

Scared of the unknown darkness
She cries for joy,
   Her soul in despair,
Fights all the battles.
She hid her woes,
And her tears of blood.
One is still perplexed;
And wonders over it.
But the mystery remains,


ambiguous_angel said...

well, i have to agree with the title:)

anyway, still nicely written.

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

so sad..but so nice..i like the mystery here :)

take care my friend x)

suruchi said...

Oooooo why so sad?
Out of every unknown darkness comes the ray of light...

Just read above "am only 16"
Awww...stay sixteen,sweet n happy:-))
Glad to know u are well again n all the best for the exams:-)

ABHISHEK SiM said...

I could relate this something I had experienced a few years ago.

There was this sudden demand to perform well. A few days ago, I was nervous. But that night I was calm. And very strangely focused. I could see everything... That night was like enlightenment.

May be this post was meant to evoke "Random" things in random people...

p.s.: Good to see you are still writing :)

Selenium said...

After reading this, I assume there are too many out of the blue poems in your blog...


Rather there are too many poems with the title "Random" in them. Sometimes I have difficulty finding the ones I want to read again...

My suggestion... title them Please O.O

Madhu said...

long time eh?? Nice write!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Angel
haha! thanks :))

@ Ayu
thank you :))

@ Suruchi
ehhh... I don't know but I like dark ones :|
haha thanks btw!

@ Abhishek
thanks! :))

@ Selenium
LOL! okay! ;)

@ Madhu
yeah I was not well ;)


Hi CL,

Indeed, very nice... partly sad... and partly confusing!!!:)

Good day!!!:)



Chocolate Lover said...

@ Kelvin
LOL yup! it's confusing ;) :P

Sankoobaba said...

one wonders!!

mystery indeed, short and sweet!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ sSankoo baba
thank you!

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

I really wonder what troubles her so much. I hope she will be able to overcome her obstacles soon enough.