Sunday, February 7, 2010

"She..."

Smiles the infinite blue,
Whispers the mists,
They know she has,
something to reveal,
Sorrow behind her joy,
Tears in her glittering eyes,
She awaits the dark,
Stuck between True and False,
She ponders her thoughts,
Dreams of love,
Bears her woes,
Fears to be alone.
The setting sun cries,
The deep blue ocean sighs,
With a fake smile in heart,
Once again she walks all alone..

9 comments:

Sankoobaba said...

really liked this poem..
feel like dedicating it to someone...

Rishi said...

she seems confused

Love said...

maybe she's alone bcs she's chosen that...

she's fighting the voices telling her to go against her own heart...

Sorcerer said...

:) another good one

Rohit Dassani said...

She walk alone again...wow...nice!!

An Ordinary Gal said...

Fear of loneliness everyone has...nice poem btw :)

ambiguous_angel said...

love this one..

With a fake smile in heart,Once again she walks all alone..

especially that line.

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

For me "Fears to be alone" was the punchline of the poem. Nicely done! I see the sorrow behind the fake smile this soul wears on her face.

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Sankoo baba
thanks! :))

@ Rishi
hmmm...

@ Love
May be! :|

@ Sorcy
thank u sorcy ^_^

@ Rohit
thanks! :))

@ Riya
thank you :))

@ Angel
thank you! :)

@ Vittaldas
thank you!
glad you liked it ^_^