Yeah, it's kind of sad, makes me worry just a little about you, but, if you want to write a good poem, you have to write what you're really feeling. :) The way I see it a good poem is like a snapshot: it only shows a small piece of reality, but it's true to that piece.
Why being so dark in poems fascinates you? I would also like to see a break-free option. It is OK, if you cannot break free, but there should be that escape route that is so eludes the escaper! Try it out next time for a better punch. :-)
15 comments:
sad poemz make me sad..:(
y the sad face dear??? cheer up
Melancholy and painful.Hey Chocy(I'd like to call you that :D) why so sad my dear?Write a happier one ne?
But nice write! :)
Y so sad?
really nice! :) ^_^
I like the sadness thou (hope nothing hurts you by saying that! :D)
M dere besides u..
dont wry.
Just keep writing choco...
Cheers
Nuts
@ Madhu
sorry didn't want to make anyone sad :(
@ Ayu
Thank you! :))
@ Freelancer
just change of mood
@ Samadrita
Swinging mood :P
The problem is its hard for me to write a brighter one :P
@ Sandeep
swinging mood :P
@ Tharangni
thanks dear!
@ Nipun
thank you :))
Its beautiful sister :)
welcome to twitter too ^_^
@ SUNAKSHI DI
THANK YOU DI :))
Yeah, it's kind of sad, makes me worry just a little about you, but, if you want to write a good poem, you have to write what you're really feeling. :) The way I see it a good poem is like a snapshot: it only shows a small piece of reality, but it's true to that piece.
wisewit
@ wisewit
thank you! :))
Hi CL,
Another short yet very captivating poem... well done!!!:)
Good day!!!:)
>Kelvin
a fake smile...and real tears...
apt contrast.
@ Kelvin
thanks buddy :))
@ Sankoo baba
thank you :))
Why being so dark in poems fascinates you? I would also like to see a break-free option. It is OK, if you cannot break free, but there should be that escape route that is so eludes the escaper! Try it out next time for a better punch. :-)
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