Thursday, October 15, 2009

Missing you...


Why did you leave me alone,
to face the world all alone....
You made me smile,
And never let the tears to come in my eyes not even for a while...
You taught me to fight,
The battles of right...
You veiled your pains with a smiling face,
And got busy in teaching me the living grace...
Once you shared your sorrow,
But didn't let me to borrow...
You rescued me from every trouble,
And made a wish to a secret bubble..
The bond which we shared was really unique,
The powers in it were known as mystic...
You didn't let me know when you were about to die,
I was so lost that I didn't cry.
I was so addicted to you,
But I am only left with those past view....

7 comments:

rimz said...

y soo sad dear?
the piece is just too awesome. u dnt seem 15!!!!
at dis age u shudnt b sooo sad, go out and have fun dear...:)
tke cre.. cya soon wid some jollier pieces..
toodles...

sulagna said...

oiii ki holo...why such a sad one today:) diwali is just here so you need to sparkle, dazzle and shine on :)

Shriti said...

@ rimz and sulagna
I too don't know why am feeling so sad..
ne ways happy diwali

S. said...

Beautiful piece :-)

I can understand the pain behind the words.but believe me,when there's a night there's a morning too.

none has control over life.though everyone wants to have..

Shriti said...

@sunakshi
thanx :)

ܔܢܜܔKrAzY KoMpLeX KiTtEn(๏̯͡๏) : said...

hey this one's a really beautiful and heart-touching poem...loved it..!!!

Shriti said...

@ krazy kitten
thanx :)