Tuesday, May 18, 2010

"..was found guilty.."

Adored freedom but,
still trapped somewhere,
I was found guilty to care;
I was found guilty to share..

The smile on my face was him;
Even in dark the light never seemed dim;
I was a fool and still am.
I was found guilty to trust;
I was found guilty which was a must..

I was scared to get closer;
'cause nothing lasted with me forever!
A bitter sweet loneliness was better;
I was found guilty to befriend him;
I was found guilty to scream..

I stayed awake when I was supposed to be asleep,
These feelings are still strong and deep,
My soul forgot to weep;
I was found guilty to daydream;
I was found guilty to be under moonbeam..

Want him to be happy,
Wished that he never feel lonely,
Cried for him bitterly..
I was found guilty to think we are peers;
I was found guilty to shed tears..

Felt so warm and cozy,
Whenever he hugged me;
I fell in illusion and was giggly,
I was found guilty to be in love..
I was found guilty to consider it love..


AJai said...

Nice! :)

Jay said...

so sweet........
hi me too gave poetry a shot...
don't now how i score...but would like u to review it ...seems u r quite good at it....and if i qualify hope u wont mind adding this new blogger to ur blogroll.
happy blogging.........

Tara said...

touching lines !!

HaRy!! said...

:( ... we all are!

Jingle said...

loved it, ;)

anupama said...

Dear Chocolate Lover,
Good Morning!
Never feel guilty for the past,
It was a passing phase.
You have become wiser now,
Love is just not a bed of roses!
A new face steps in,a lovely word is heard,
The sun will rise brighter!
You love chocolates a lot!
Give time,better chocolates will reach you!:)
Time heals all wounds.Forgive and move on.....
Wishing you a wonderful day ahead,


...great one... a most enjoyable piece in here!!!:)

Good day!!!:)


Gauri Mathur said...

I liked the picture also :)

♫♪♥Lonely Dreamer♥♪♫ said...

I can feel those lines prick me.
It's beautiful !

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

aww..one of the most touching poems youve ever made!

karan a said...

Beautiful and full of lovely expressions as always!

An award is waiting for you at my blog! Congratulations!

suruchi said...

We all are guilty in our own ways!
It’s better to be guilty than ignorant of all that may be possible!:=)

Sankoobaba said...

"I was found guilty to consider it love.."

the above line moved me...

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

It really made me feel sad. Amazing structure and nice flow. Really touches.

P.S.: I don't think there is a word "falled". :P