"The allotment of death was so sure;You died when they found the cure.." insanely expressive!You are missing your friends badly!
may be u badly need a besht friend..:)
this is really beautiful. anyone who has lost a loved one will feel your anguish.very beautiful.
I feel your longing for your old friend(s)...beautiful poem!
@ Kranyea.. I am T__T@ Madhuyupp I need T___T@ Suryagnithanks for dropping and keep visitingactually it was for a friend who died but its okay :)@ Jinglethanks..and yea.. T__T
Loved it a lot.......so touchy :)
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/03/jingles-may-awards-week-1-awards-4-u-all/I posted the awards for May.please feel free to take what you want from there.Happy Monday!
thats is such a touching write...sad... keep writing,,,
Nice one. The picture is so sad and lonely that it gives out the total essence of the poem! Lovely poem!
lovelllllllllllly poemm, quite expressive but too sad shri , hope u find a gud frnd soon,,,
Gud poem there..... shows your true affection and commitment towards friends.
the allotment of death....stunning shree
aww sad and touching poem choco..try to make friendship with yourself..I know u r missing ur friends bt try to be happy with yourself. You have so many reasons to be happy..just find them out.take care dear :)
Hi Choco...I know you miss your friend...But be brave girl...Life moves on and so must we too:-)Though your friend would be so proud of you...Heart touching expressions there!
deep thoughts.....but too gud
I can understand what you are going through. Sometimes so many things that must be told remain untold and they remain that until end of times. However it is not good to stay at that roadblock, we need to move on. I know you are already in the process, it just takes time. Be brave dear. You can do it. :-)
Awww..dats really sad ! yeah its a rotten feeling to miss our best friend ...and it hurts all the more when you know you can never keep a false hope of meeting them again !
missing a loved one..very well expressed.. keep it up
left me in teary eyes...:(something in this...is a part of me,M sorry to say that
This poem is so beautiful! I can feel the sadness and Im sure if your friend saw it, she would be overwhelmed. Take care
youre getting better and better..i like the words hat you used and the feelings are present ^_^btw..ive already added your avatar and link in my affiliates page.,.come and check it out! ^_^
@ Cute priyathanks@ Jinglethank you so much jingle..you are so awesome :))@ Rajlakshmithanks xD@ Juhithanks juhi@ nitwiti hope that too :| thanks :)@ Dudothanks ^.^@ Sulagna dithanks di :)@ Riyai will Riya :) @ Suruchiyea..i know :|@ Lincolnthanks :)@ Vittaldashmmm..yeah..i am trying to move on :|@ Koothanks koo :)@ Adreamygaltrue T___T@ Sankoo babathanks :)@ PulkitI'm sorry.. :(@ Vidyaummm..she's dead actually :|@ Ayuthanks :|
Your lines made ma heart cry.....:cSuch a beautiful verse....And cool template!!
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/05/thursday-poets-rally-week-17-may-6-12-2010-homecoming/you are given three award from the post from me.thanks for the invaluable support!
ahm.what can i say?its really beautiful.sad but nicely written.made me miss my bestfriend more.
you're a great writer! I gave you a blogger friends award. Check out my blog! :)http://cherylclarke.blogspot.com
@ nEEYATHANKS :|@ jINGLETHANKIYU JINGLE.. YOU ARE REALLY SWEET :D@ Ambiguous angelaww..i'm sorry T.Tthis one was for my best friend who died :(@ Cherylawww..so sweet of you..thank you so much :)
All i can say is... open the doors for new ones...
U've got a lot of creativity put into your blog :)Touching poem. It was, brave.
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