Monday, May 3, 2010

"..Just A wish.."

A wish..just a wish,
that would never come true..
No this feeling ain't new..
Somewhere deep inside my heart..
a voice says..

I just want my friend back,
No one knows my heart aches;

Many Secrets were to be shared,
and confessions were to be made..

The moments when we were together,
I am cherishing it forever..

Smiles and tears in my eye, says,
those enchanting memories can never die..

Your absence in my life matters,
Somewhere  in this pleasing silence my soul shatters..

The allotment of death was so sure;
You died when they found the cure..

I have some fond regrets and a whimpering soul,
My impregnable heart still consoles..

31 comments:

karan a said...

"The allotment of death was so sure;
You died when they found the cure.." insanely expressive!

You are missing your friends badly!

Madhu said...

may be u badly need a besht friend..:)

suryagni said...

this is really beautiful. anyone who has lost a loved one will feel your anguish.

very beautiful.

Jingle said...

I feel your longing for your old friend(s)...
beautiful poem!

♥ Chocolate Lover ♥ said...

@ Kran
yea.. I am T__T

@ Madhu
yupp I need T___T

@ Suryagni
thanks for dropping and keep visiting
actually it was for a friend who died but its okay :)

@ Jingle
thanks..and yea.. T__T

CutePriya said...

Loved it a lot.......so touchy :)

Jingle said...

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I posted the awards for May.
please feel free to take what you want from there.
Happy Monday!

Rajlakshmi said...

thats is such a touching write...
sad... keep writing,,,

♫♪♥W!nK♥♪♫ said...

Nice one. The picture is so sad and lonely that it gives out the total essence of the poem! Lovely poem!

nitwit said...

lovelllllllllllly poemm, quite expressive but too sad shri , hope u find a gud frnd soon,,,

DuDo said...

Gud poem there..... shows your true affection and commitment towards friends.

sulagna ™ said...

the allotment of death....stunning shree

An Ordinary Gal said...

aww sad and touching poem choco..try to make friendship with yourself..I know u r missing ur friends bt try to be happy with yourself. You have so many reasons to be happy..just find them out.

take care dear :)

suruchi said...

Hi Choco...
I know you miss your friend...
But be brave girl...
Life moves on and so must we too:-)

Though your friend would be so proud of you...
Heart touching expressions there!

Lincoln said...

deep thoughts.....but too gud

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

I can understand what you are going through. Sometimes so many things that must be told remain untold and they remain that until end of times. However it is not good to stay at that roadblock, we need to move on. I know you are already in the process, it just takes time. Be brave dear. You can do it. :-)

Koo said...

Sadness :(
takecare.

adreamygal said...

Awww..dats really sad ! yeah its a rotten feeling to miss our best friend ...and it hurts all the more when you know you can never keep a false hope of meeting them again !

Sankoobaba said...

missing a loved one..
very well expressed.. keep it up

PULKIT said...

left me in teary eyes...
:(
something in this...is a part of me,M sorry to say that

vidya said...

This poem is so beautiful! I can feel the sadness and Im sure if your friend saw it, she would be overwhelmed.
Take care

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♥ Chocolate Lover ♥ said...

@ Cute priya
thanks

@ Jingle
thank you so much jingle..you are so awesome :))

@ Rajlakshmi
thanks xD

@ Juhi
thanks juhi

@ nitwit
i hope that too :| thanks :)

@ Dudo
thanks ^.^

@ Sulagna di
thanks di :)

@ Riya
i will Riya :)

@ Suruchi
yea..i know :|

@ Lincoln
thanks :)

@ Vittaldas
hmmm..yeah..i am trying to move on :|

@ Koo
thanks koo :)

@ Adreamygal
true T___T

@ Sankoo baba
thanks :)

@ Pulkit
I'm sorry.. :(

@ Vidya
ummm..she's dead actually :|

@ Ayu
thanks :|

NEEYA ............ said...

Your lines made ma heart cry.....:c
Such a beautiful verse....
And cool template!!

Jingle said...

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you are given three award from the post from me.
thanks for the invaluable support!

ambiguous_angel said...

ahm.
what can i say?
its really beautiful.
sad but nicely written.

made me miss my bestfriend more.

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♥ Chocolate Lover ♥ said...

@ nEEYA
THANKS :|

@ jINGLE
THANKIYU JINGLE.. YOU ARE REALLY SWEET :D

@ Ambiguous angel
aww..i'm sorry T.T
this one was for my best friend who died :(

@ Cheryl
awww..so sweet of you..thank you so much :)

sm said...

beautiful poem

Divya said...

All i can say is... open the doors for new ones...

et said...

U've got a lot of creativity put into your blog :)
Touching poem. It was, brave.