Saturday, May 29, 2010

"..loneliness and me.."

Cursing my fate,
'cause I always hurt you,
Pardon me pease,
I never meant to do so..

Rejoices my soul,
but still  it's sad somewhere,
where the low light shatters,
darkness matters!

I Just cry all alone,
and Scream till pains are gone..
pearl like tears,
rolling down my cheeks..

No stars in the sky,
Just a pale white moon,
Yes I know I'll die soon,
don't have to shed tears now..

Hollowness in my life,
and emptiness in my heart,
dreams don't come true,
if it does it would be only you..

The choppy sea,
and the pleasing breeze,
The bitter sweet lonliness ,
and the weary darkness!

I am worthless or naive?
seems like i am in dark caves!
begging you to hold my hand,
'cause i am scared..

Till the time I am alive,
be with me, my soul,
Don't you want to be here?
Or you are just don't
wanna show that you care?


Chocolatelover said...

Awww....... this is a very sweet poem, and very touching. :)
You've done a really good job, keep it up. :D

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

awww..i was blown away..filled with heavy emotions :)

i heart this lines:

"dreams don't come true,
if it does it would be only you.."

An Ordinary Gal said... is so lovely penned down but sad too :(


Though sad... i believe you have portrayed each word in such an emotional yet really touching message... i'm in awe... bravo!!!:)

I'm glad you liked the poem i dedicated to you b4 i left... hope you're well and safe my friend...!!!:)



Anand said...

Interesting lines. I liked the playing of words.
More to come?

Leo said...

hi Shriti, this was sooo filled with emotions.. very nicely written! :)

ur poems are having that simplicity and heart voice at same time. good!

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ chocolatelover
haha! thank you ^-^

@ Ayu
awww..glad you liked it ^-^

@ Riya
haha! you know me right? ;)
i write sad ones! :))

@ Kelvin
haha! kelvin.. i am so glad that you liked it xD
yup i am feeling good and you are really awesome you know..that poem really cheered me up! xD

@ Anand
hi! haha! welcome to my little space..
glad that you liked it and yeah you'll get more xP

@ Leo
awww.. thanks leo xD
glad that you liked it ^-^

Jingle said...

two poetry awards,
two general awards,
Thank you for the invaluable contribution in Thursday Poets Rally week 20.
U Rock!

Jingle said...

very well done!

Sankoobaba said...

dont be scared...

nice poem!!!

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

I guess it is time the protagonist moved on and got out of his/her shell. Nice lines though.

Jingle said...

please visit to get Shakira back...
many thanks!