Sunday, May 9, 2010

.....

A dream..may be shattered,
A wish..may be falsifying
A lie..may be of worth
A truth..may be unrevealed

But it doesn't matter anymore
'cause someone knows
they has you to adore
In dark, a blissfull spark
Miles apart two hearts
cries and curses their fate

A false hope of being together
Moist eyes and a mumbling voice
Bitter sweet silence and
an illusion

Daydreams two naive lives
some lies in their eyes
But that doesn't matter
'cause their soul cries..

P.S. can't think of a title coz lots of things are mixed in it even my feelings! >.<
PPS. I am so sorry.. I know I've been away from blogosphere but..nothing seems right..it's making me cry.. I dont know What I am feeling..never felt this before. x(
PPPS. May be I would delete all my accounts..and may be even my blog!
PPPPS. I need a title! :O don't forget about the title for this one! :|

11 comments:

wisewit said...

One thing: like I said before, it's a good idea to take some time and think about things before you do anything drastic (like deleting all your blogs!), you might regret it later otherwise. I still like reading your blog, but I don't know your situation so I don't know what's best.

Take care of yourself,

wisewit

Sankoobaba said...

oye!! dont delete !! relax

and yeah the title..

"two hearts..crying..afar"

ok i am not so good at these things,,

Rishi said...

titles are not imp... such beautiful lines are..

nice one

http://theparanormalguy.blogspot.com/

Nipun said...

Nice work choco..:)
Live life as it cums..:)
Why delete accounts and all?
I luv reading ur posts..:)
The title would be Away..:)

Cheers

Nuts

Divya said...

u write beautifully..

just relax now... n go away from all the social networks for a while... come back, u ll jus feel great :) :)

Koo said...

WHATTTAA?! Do NOT delete your blog Woman. I COMMAND thee.
The End.

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Every normal human being goes through what you are going through. You want to be detached completely from the world, have no contact with any life form, just get into a shell and live there forever. But this feeling dies away slowly, slowly but it does go away, and if you had severed all ties with the world you would definitely regret it.

So, take time out and let the negativity drain itself out. At the end of it all you will emerge fresh and rejuvenated, with renewed spirits.

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

hey dont delete your blog!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! youre such a nice blogger and i dont want to lose you..

im not so good at title making but i can recommend:

"DAYDREAM LIES"

^_^

btw..happy mother's day to all the mothers in the world! ^_^
(p.s. check out my latest post if you have time,,.thanks :3)

suryagni said...

beautiful and touching- well, may be farewell will appear good on this poem.

dont stop writing you are a very talented writer.

suruchi said...

Hi...
Nope...no deleting...
Hang around n face the challenges...
It's easy to run away...but then it becomes the sad habit of life..

We need to stand tall n proud n take everything in our stride...
All the best n hugs

Hmmm...title?
Light Across the Tunnel:-)

et said...

Why delete your accounts so? Just take a break and don't come online for a while! And when you finally come back, you'll be teeming with a lot of ideas to get on with your blog :)