Saturday, December 26, 2009

"death that is to come.."

Walking towards the long horizon,
To find a new place;
Where one is happy,
In being alone.

Life seems terrible,
With all the pleasures;
Falling in darkness,
Disappered in crowd;

Truth cries in despair,
Living the Nightmare, every moment;
Lost smile peeping seldomly,
Shutting the doors for joy;

Heart sinkin' in Memoirs,
Tired eyes Starin' the haunted one;
The brave soul is not scared of,
the death that is to come..


Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Extremely thought-oriented and cryptic. Good one.

Sorcerer said...

as always... well done.

Chocolate Lover said...

@ vittaldas prabhu
phew! atleast I did one thing without any mistakes! :)
I am really glad that you liked it!
thank you! :))

@ sorcey
thank you ! ^_^

shravan said...

that was really an awesome piece.. add some base guitar and some drum rolls and sing it loud !

Sankoobaba said...

sounds suicidal

good one.. as always

Nipun said...

That was awesome.
First time here.
U took my heart away..
Great work.


♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said... thought-provoking and lonely..>.< super nice..i like it..i felt the pain of the girl..TAT!! and the pic. you chose complemented the poem too..nice pic..XD

Chocolate Lover said...

@ shravan
hehe thank you!
sigh I don't have a guitar :(

@ sankoobaba
thank you

@ Nipun
thank you :)

@ ayu
thankies! :)

mona said...

this blog is awesome....suprisingly it..