Thursday, December 24, 2009

"Broken heart"


Betrayed by fate,
Ruined long ago,
Only left to,
Keep those,
Enchanting and,
Nostalgic memories that,

Hurts,
Every moment,
And adds more,
Rage,
Till life comes to an end.

13 comments:

Rohit Dassani said...

Very nice dear!! :) love it!!

Sorcerer said...

why is there mostly pain..me wonder..
as pain I say, brings the most beautiful words in the heart.
so are the poets so obsessed by the pain, and they created beautiful fractal images from it

SiD said...

hey wow... this is superb poem yaar...

Shravan said...

thats something good i read after long time :-) loved it and merry christmas :)

Rajlakshmi said...

very touching lines...
well penned...

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Rohit
thanks ^_^

@ Sorcey
^_^

@ Sid
thanks for dropping by..
am really glad that you liked my poem :)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Shravan
Really?
Thank you
and Merry Christmas to you too :)

@ Rajlakshmi
Thanks for dropping by and leaving a comment
'am really glad :)

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Nicely done acrostic. A little dark, but brings out the true emotions of a broken heart.

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Vittaldas Prabhu
thanks :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

so nice :3

Chocolate Lover said...

@ ayu
thank you :)

Sankoobaba said...

damn! damn!
its perfect..

thats how i felt..still do...

"Enchanting and,
Nostalgic memories"

yes... that is all that is left to ruminate on..

"Till life comes to an end."

Chocolate Lover said...

@ sankoo baba
:)