Monday, December 21, 2009

"Dark pleasures"

Betrayal,
fear,
tears of blood,
hatred,
loneliness,
are the dark
pleasures in my life..

13 comments:

sulagna said...

yiayiii shree is back :) missed you babe...how were the exams??

Chocolate Lover said...

@ sulagna di
hi di..
I missed you too
exams were worst specially MATHS!! T_T

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Hey Shree,

Why do i see so much of pain in your poems?

Look out for your spelling mistakes once from next time..

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

At my blog you asked me a question.

I think you can call me what you wish to, but a curious thought Shree...What made you say so? :) I mean i am sure i haven't done anything like that.

Did i? let me know :)

shravan said...

towards the darker side now? good compo by the way :-)

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Why so much pain for a tender one like you? You may say that this is just a few things not relating to you, but verses are always a reflection of what the writer/author is or wants people to know of him/her.

I like the economy of the words. Little is more in this case. Nice one.

Sorcerer said...

that was stright forward..just like other poems..
hmm... so much pain it has...


pain leads to anger..anger leads to suffering..suffering leads to blogging poems...

in your words...dark side...i see..

Sunakshi said...

outta words re!

Rahil said...

nice..
& merry christmas in advance :)

Sankoobaba said...

do try other dark pleasures like chocolate
instead of tears of blood

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

O.o!!!wow..so deep dark words you used! so cool! :3

Chocolate Lover said...

@ mahesh bhaiya
Just change of mood :)
thank you i will :)

@ shravan
just thought to do something different

@ vittaldas prabhu
hi welcome to my blog..
glad you liked it :)

@ sorcey
true :)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ sunakshi di
thanks

@ rahil
same to you :)

@ sankoo baba
wo toh bahut bar try kar chuki hu yaar! socha is bar kuch naya try karu :)

@ ayu
thanks :)