Monday, December 28, 2009

"This is me"

Have been kinda girl,
that hid the real face.
With a fake smile in heart,
I lived my part.


So afraid to tell the world,
that I've got to say.
The dreams peeps now,
Right inside of me.


Do you know how,
Its feels so in the dark?
Eyes dreams of life,
Where you have all the spark.


But dreams are like,
Tides of the sea.
If you try to hold,
It won't stop for you.


It seems that the ,
dream is far away.
I have to believe in myself,
It's the only way.


This is true,
That's what I am.
I would find a place,
Where I am the shining star.

This is me.
Now i've found,
who I am.
No more hiding from anyone.


This is me..

21 comments:

WINDOWLAD said...

wow, very exquisite... loved the read.. hey, thanks for another appreciations from you...!!!:)

>Kelvin

Sunakshi said...

This is me.
Now i've found,
who I am.
No more hiding from anyone.

woha!supercool *wink*

May you get best of everything :)

tristarfivestar said...

wooooooooow i love your blog!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i think im jealous of it :P

Phoenix said...

beautiful blog..even more beautiful bond..and wonderful words!

Sorcerer said...

another fantastic lines about life..
:)

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

:)

Simply Poet said...

beautiful lines

do post them on
www.simplypoet.com

World's first multi lingual poetry portal

Also check out other poems written by young poets like you!!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Kelvin
Thank you! :)

@ Sunakshi di
Thank you ^_^
Love you di!

@ Tristarfivestar
Hahaha!
Really? :P

@ Phoenix
Thank you! :)

@ Sorcerer
Thanks! ^_^

@ Shravan
^_^

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Simply poet
????
Huh???!!

Sankoobaba said...

fantastic..

if i make a movie..
and need an inspiration song.. for the lead..

this poem would be it.. the theme song...great!!

The16YearOldNaive said...

similar to the lyrics of "this is me" by demi lavato.

:)
i like this one.

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

wow..so nice..and you have included rhymes too..that's good..

i think some of the lines came from a song of camp rock am i right..?

but not really the same..maybe im just ,mistaken..coz when i read it..its exactly what registered on my mind..X3

Chocolate Lover said...

@ sankoo baba
:D

@ 16yearoldnaive
yeah this one was inspired by demi

@ Ayu
yeah! :)

Gauri Mathur said...

Beautiful!! :)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ gauri
thanks!

Rushabhh Gandhi said...

Welcome to the World!! :)

You write good poetry!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Rushabh Gandhi
thank you :))

A~heartless~brain said...

nicely put together....keep up the spirit :)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ heartless brain
thanks :)

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

This is one is a uplifting poem. The words show a lot of hope. Good one.

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Vittaldas
thanks! :))