emotions are so silent and unique..its hard to share as it could only be shared by like minded :)well written!
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Well worded :)
as usual emotions at its best !
few emotions are to be felt in silence when cant be shared.. reallly difficult.. but tru.. nice lines.. :)
the last line.."No one.."you left it incomplete...so when reader reads it ..he completes the sentence in his/her mind..feeling the same thoughts of the protagonist...feeling the ...pain..
wow..the emotions are well expressed and i like its repetitions..!
Very nicely written Shree :) I am glad that you are getting better at poetry from day one.I think, the meaning of each line is equally deep with the flow :)The line that catches more is "No one knows".
i hope she smiles from the heaart very soon :)
You speak of masks. All of wear masks and hide behind it for various reasons. But, here is a girl/woman who is wearing a mask that allows her to pretend to be on top of things. The anguish is deeply hidden in her expressions, just that normal people will fall for it and look up to her to be their happiness Guru. It's like they say that there is deep sorrow or anguish behind a stand comedian act.And yes, not to take any credit away from the verses, nicely done. Cheers,Vittal
I hope somedaysomeone will realize.. :)
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