Friday, October 15, 2010

"..tears.."

Tears and scars are my fate,
I find no reason for crying
but today, my tears aren't mine.

I wish if I could stop;
My absence never bothered anyone
and it won't till the end.

I'll melt in twilight,
I'll walk in misty night
and then I'll disappear in darkness.

Leaving behind some enchanting
memories and misty eyes,
and a bit pain in your heart.

20 comments:

Phewww said...

hey.. i think you hav had some bad experiences in life.. are you sad most of the time?? if not, then y do u keep writing sad posts???? :(

c'mon..cheer up... 4get abt ur worries... n keep smiling...

n take a break..keep some 'happy' post titles.. no more tears, scars, betray n all that... okkkkk... :)

keep smiling... :) n the poem is nice.. :D

kelvin s.m. said...

...o, this poem is full of melancholy... consistent emotions from the starting phrase to the last line... i just hope the emotions are only intended to make this poem and not to you personally, feelin' this way.... cheers!!!:D

TC.

>Kelvin

Unknown said...

what makes u this upset at this young age...tell me?

eyeography said...

Wow...really touched my heart...
very well written... :)

Sorcerer said...

hey..back after a long time in your blog
Nice to see that its active

as always..another pretty nice one from you.
good work..keep it up!

Koo said...

You're very good with sad poetry :)
It touches the heart..

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Anonymous said...

Dat was really one of your best writing ..matured and crisp words .. I loved the 3rd line - "but today, my tears aren't mine." .. Loved the entire poem a lot .. depths of pain are , in best way , framed in simplest words ! :)

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

so well done,
I feel your emotions...

sanket kambli said...

im touched

Shriti said...

@ Anoop

yeah kinda xD

hmm I can't do that.. I really think too much.. and I like writing sad poems 'cause they are mostly my feelings :3

Shriti said...

@ Kelvin

hehe.. I am fine kelvin ^-^

thanks for caring *hugs* :))

Shriti said...

@ Madhu
u wont believe.. buttt a lot of stuffs :]

*hugs*

Shriti said...

@ Sumit

thank you sumit ^^

Shriti said...

@ Sorcy

wb sorcy.. hope to see u again and again and again :P

Shriti said...

@ Koo

thank you ^^

Shriti said...

@ Moon shine

thank you.. and yeah sure as soon as possible :3

Shriti said...

@ adreamygal

awwww thank you so much.. ^_^

Shriti said...

@ Jingle

:))

Shriti said...

@ Sankoobaba

haha1 glad to know :)