Thursday, October 7, 2010

"She.."

I saw her peeping in;
She had few scars on her faces,
and red puffy eyes.
as if she hasn't slept since,
many nights.
She was wearing pink
dress and a tired smile.

She was scared and shattered.
She was someone's betrayed beloved.
May be she was lost in
her mesmerizing thoughts.
I was staring at her and
I don't know when
A tear rolled down my cheek.

There was something peculiar
in her which was bothering
me deep inside my heart.
I tend to go closer to her
but as I reached near,
She started running towards
the immense crowd.

I ran after her, I wanted to
know what had happened.
I wanted to help her but
she ran as if she didn't want.
I kept searching for
her in the crowd but
She had disappeared forever.

15 comments:

Ajay Kontham said...

Beautifully written.
Enjoyed reading it. :) :D

~ Ajay Kontham

MinnieRunner said...

Nice. I love the way you write it.

MoonShine said...

You Can Easily Say In The Form Of Words..Very Telented !

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Bea said...

i love the intensity of the situation depicted.. =)

Selenium said...

Attracted to sad looking girls???

O_o

But the description of the sad girl was good... if such a girl appeared in reality, I'd definitely put a chase. Dunno about the tears rolling down cheek part... :-|

writerzblock said...

Beautiful!!!! And so sad.... hope she does return. Sometimes what seems the 'end' is actually just a 'bend' (in the river). Stole that from something read somewhere a long time back :-)

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viddhi said...

hayii..li'l girl .. its beautiful ...
loved reading your words. !

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Ajay

thanks ^^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Minnie runner

thank you ^_^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Moonshine

hehe.. thank you ^^

and yeah sure :3

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Bea
thanks ^^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Selenium

lol xD loved ur comment hahaha xD

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ writerzblock

yup yup :3

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Viddhi

hehe thanks viddhi :3

WINDOWLAD said...

...mysterious girl... what had happened to her??? i'm curious???(T_T)