Sunday, October 3, 2010

..don't betray me again.."

Do they care if I cry,
Or if I die?
No they won't!
They are just some heartless freak.

But what do they gain in being so,
Envious and someone,
To break promises?
Rise and,
Again fall 'cause its,
Your "destiny".

May be it is  my destiny but then,
Eventually it leaves scares which,

Aren't visible but,
Gives so much pains,
And little heart attacks,
In darkness,
Never make it happen. don't betray me again..

8 comments:

nitwit said...

dont trust easily its just the key ... muahhhhhh ur post is awesome as allways

Jingle said...

lovely delivery.

WINDOWLAD said...

...we make our own destiny... our own path... and GOD walks first, before He allow us go our own...^^

Good Day!!!:)

Bea said...

i love ur poems.. they are so touchy...

Cheryl: Oh to Be a Muse said...

i like how the title of the poem is repeated in the first word of each line. very creative!

http://ohtobeamuse.com

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

aww..regaining trust is hard but forgiving someone who has betrayed you is something not all can do ^^

Selenium said...

This was more lyric than poetic. I once again found my self humming this to some tune...

What say? Should I try working on that tune XD ??

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Selenium

sure XD