Sunday, October 10, 2010

"..scars.."

With his eyes locked on mine,
May be it was the only sign.
For the first time I felt togetherness,
in despair and lonliness.

I didn't see the world around me,
My teary eyes smiled with glee.
My soul yelled "I don't wanna leave you,
My breath now left are very few."


He leaned in closer,
I was scared, his touch made me shiver;
He held my hand tight,
I looked away 'cause it wasn't right.

His eyes were locked on my neck
and he could easily see the wreck.
Tried a lot to hide those scars,
a delightful curse by the Mars.

He clinched his teeth and,
his hand,
turned into fist,
I found myself in mist..

He didn't utter a word,
his eyes full of rage looked like a sword,
I stood up and my teary eyes,
whispered descent lies.

I could easily listen to his heart
saying "we aren't yet apart."
I could feel the wrath of his soul,
yelling, "how could he do this for his goal?"

And his rage disappeared,
as I held on to his fist and sneered;
He looked down and sighed,
My hands tensed and he smiled.

He kissed my scars,
and a thousand million stars;
illuminated the sky for that
one moment which had no threat.

I came close and hugged him tight,
It was a dreadful night.
I turned back and whispered good bye;
I cried till my tears get dry.

He ran after me and seized my hand,
Misty eyes said "sorry", I gave him, his friendship band;
and disappeared in the woods away;
from his life across the bay...








22 comments:

Anurag said...

hey,

" wonderful words to the least,
emotions always on the high.
you amaze me,
with each letter of your speech. "

^-^ . I don't think that sounds like a poem.
as always your work was amazing.

Nipun said...

wow!!
Choco is growing day by day as an author..:)

'Cries until my tears went dry'

This was really wonderful and heart touching..
God going sweety..

Cheers

Nuts

YAM said...

wow.that's really good.
its as if Im reading a story..

Selenium said...

What happened here??? O_o
I mean, did someone die or did someone run away because they couldn't be together??

I put my money on the latter, but I must say... 'twas "Intense" :)

Madhu said...

wow..u actually wrote this..OMG

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Anurag

hehe thank you ^^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Nipun

hehe yeah i guess :3

thank you ^_^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Yam

hehe.. yeah.. i penned it like that xD

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Selenium

she is going to die soon so she ran away :3

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Madhu

yeah XD

and thanks ^-^

bibhash k jha said...

teach me some poetry too .. how u do that ??? u r just so great ...i love the lucidity and flow of your worthless shit ( love :( ) ..srry abt that :P :P

device independent mobility said...

The stanza is very nice and lovable..

MinnieRunner said...

I love the stanza where he kissed the scars :)

Great!

WINDOWLAD said...

....oh, a poem at its best... magnifico Shriti!!!! i am hoping to see more and more of this...

...d(*,*)b...

Sumit Sarkar said...

Beautiful....touched my soul deeply...
keep writing... :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

"He kissed my scars,
and a thousand million stars;"

i love these lines..!

the story in your poem is really good..i can imagine it..aww..so cute ^^

♫♪♥Lonely Dreamer♥♪♫ said...

Amazing !!!!!!
I loved it totally!

Sourav said...

I can see some reality and love in this verse!

Tori said...

Amazing.

Ria said...

That was really well written.

Pulkit said...

Really nice poem. It accurately captures the feeling of love and the fear of separation :)

kixon said...

great poem if you need help chearing up i know a few good feel beeter songs