Friday, October 15, 2010

"..tears.."

Tears and scars are my fate,
I find no reason for crying
but today, my tears aren't mine.

I wish if I could stop;
My absence never bothered anyone
and it won't till the end.

I'll melt in twilight,
I'll walk in misty night
and then I'll disappear in darkness.

Leaving behind some enchanting
memories and misty eyes,
and a bit pain in your heart.

20 comments:

Anoop KR said...

hey.. i think you hav had some bad experiences in life.. are you sad most of the time?? if not, then y do u keep writing sad posts???? :(

c'mon..cheer up... 4get abt ur worries... n keep smiling...

n take a break..keep some 'happy' post titles.. no more tears, scars, betray n all that... okkkkk... :)

keep smiling... :) n the poem is nice.. :D

WINDOWLAD said...

...o, this poem is full of melancholy... consistent emotions from the starting phrase to the last line... i just hope the emotions are only intended to make this poem and not to you personally, feelin' this way.... cheers!!!:D

TC.

>Kelvin

Madhu said...

what makes u this upset at this young age...tell me?

Sumit Sarkar said...

Wow...really touched my heart...
very well written... :)

Sorcerer said...

hey..back after a long time in your blog
Nice to see that its active

as always..another pretty nice one from you.
good work..keep it up!

Koo said...

You're very good with sad poetry :)
It touches the heart..

MoonShine said...

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adreamygal said...

Dat was really one of your best writing ..matured and crisp words .. I loved the 3rd line - "but today, my tears aren't mine." .. Loved the entire poem a lot .. depths of pain are , in best way , framed in simplest words ! :)

Jingle said...

so well done,
I feel your emotions...

Sankoobaba said...

im touched

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Anoop

yeah kinda xD

hmm I can't do that.. I really think too much.. and I like writing sad poems 'cause they are mostly my feelings :3

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Kelvin

hehe.. I am fine kelvin ^-^

thanks for caring *hugs* :))

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Madhu
u wont believe.. buttt a lot of stuffs :]

*hugs*

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Sumit

thank you sumit ^^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Sorcy

wb sorcy.. hope to see u again and again and again :P

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Koo

thank you ^^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Moon shine

thank you.. and yeah sure as soon as possible :3

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ adreamygal

awwww thank you so much.. ^_^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Jingle

:))

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Sankoobaba

haha1 glad to know :)