Friday, June 25, 2010

"..still with you.."

The time when we were together,
and when you fought with my fear..

When you and I were alone,
I never missed my home..

When we laid down on the grass;
and watched the bright stars..

Embracing each other was the best part,
Never thought we would stay apart..

 I was alone in my despair and
you walked away..

Just turn back once;
I am still standing behind you..

What if I am dead?
My soul still walks with you..

P.S. cried after 10 days!! this time at school.. no nothing happened.. i am a cry baby right..? Wany sir told us a story.. sad ending.. and i started crying.. though I laughed alot too... my friends don't let me cry.. aren't they awesome? :) though they have startes teasing me with pranay's name for no reason.. (v.v)
Busy with school stuffs.. can't check your blogs... but I would try.. missing you guys.. love you *hugs tight* byee :)

21 comments:

Suhina :) said...

Awww, i love your poem as ususal, and i totally love the pictures you put, Japanese animae. <3
They are pretty. :)
And about the school stuff, that keeps happening it's ok. :)

Unknown said...

Choco is the best!!
Awesome work!!

Cheers

Nuts

Abhishek Behera said...

Haha, school days are ever-swesome! and glad you are having your share.. :) full share :)

and i liked the poem. very much.

Ordinary Gal said...

nice nice...so very nice :))

Pramoda Meduri said...

Hi...cute cutee poem and nice PS.. hehe... i used to be a cryting baby at school..:)

kelvin s.m. said...

That was awesome... i'm touched... i do... i do...!!!(^^)

Cheers!!!:D

>Kelvin

Sakhi. said...

awesome poem!!
nice blog!

deeps said...

you leave it in the open and the chocolate melts ....\
some melting lines ...

Priya Chilamkurthi said...

luvd the lines sooo much.. hugs.. \:D/

YAM said...

sweeeet. love it.

Gayathri said...

Lovely wordings.....

Shriti said...

@ Chocolatelover

hehe thank you ^^

Shriti said...

@ Nipun

awwwwwwwww thank you ^________^

Shriti said...

@ Abhishek
thanks ^^

Shriti said...

@ Riya

thank you :)

Shriti said...

@ Prams di

hehe thank you ^_^

Shriti said...

@ Windowlad

thanks xD

Shriti said...

sakhii

hehe thank you (^^<)

Shriti said...

@ Deeps

haha :D

thank u :)

Shriti said...

@ Angel

thank u ^^

Shriti said...

@ Gayatri

thank u (^^.)